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(C87) [Napier Sabre (Ryu-Akt)] Private Secretary (Kantai Collection -KanColle-) [English] [tjqjck]

(C87) [Napier Sabre (Ryu-Akt)] Private Secretary (艦隊これくしょん -艦これ-) [英訳]

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Posted:2020-03-29 20:54
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Language:English  TR
File Size:22.05 MiB
Length:27 pages
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Posted on 29 March 2020, 20:54 by:   tjqjck    PM
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An English translation I made.
Posted on 29 March 2020, 22:25 by:   QualityWizard    PM
Score +29
Hey, good job on the translation. I'd like to make a comment on the typesetting.
Some pages, like 20, look really good. But with for example 12, the left alignment looks... well, it could be better. Consider a quick retouch of a textbox I've done here. https://i.imgur.com/Q9u5QI5.png
The text does look a bit different on its own (I've only approximated your settings). Still, I think it looks better as justified rather than aligned text. I know both GIMP and Photoshop have a paragraph feature, so please consider that with your next project.
Posted on 29 March 2020, 23:56 by:   H1dd3nM4st3r    PM
Score +12
Missing text on page 19 bottom panel.
Posted on 25 December 2020, 18:50 by:   DJ_Puchuu    PM
Score +13
Page 5, second panel: shouldn't that be 'I can't admire him for some reason' or 'I can't admire him for this reason'?

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