[Mack] Ultimate Incest (Danganronpa) [English]

Some spelling/grammar issues:

[p2]
"someplace look like" -> maybe "to some place that looks like" (?)
"informed that" -> "informed them that"
"feel orgasm" -> "feel an orgasm" (or maybe "reach an orgasm")
"not gonna sex" -> "not gonna have sex"
"refuse generous suggestion" -> "refuse his generous suggestion"

[p3]
"method to forcing" -> "method to force"
"get orgasm" -> "get an orgasm"

[p5]
"brother's came in" -> missing noun; maybe "brother's thing came in"?

[p9]
"you have gone" -> "you have come"
"told both of you feel orgasam" -> "told both of you to have an orgasm"
"is he told the truth" -> "is he telling the truth"

[p10]
"went away too fast" -> "came too fast"
"a premature ejaculation!!" -> "a premature ejaculator!!"

[p14]
"you've gone" -> "you've come"
"can't go" -> "can't come"

[p16]
"this posture" -> "this position"
"feel good" -> "feels good"
"Go away" -> "Come"
"intensly" -> "intensely"
"if you tight" -> "if you tighten up"

[p17]
"Oh, brother. Aren't you feel heavy?" -> "feeling", but this line makes no sense
"when did you strong" -> "when did you get strong"
"I liked this" -> "I like this"
"this posture" -> "this position"
"gonna fast" -> "come fast"

[p18]
"and premature ejaculation" -> "and he's a premature ejaculator"
"make him as a" -> "make him a"

[p19]
"always gone soon when she do it" -> "always comes quickly when she does it"
"she acted" -> "she pretended to"
"There's no woman feel" -> ???

[p20]
"is a pathetic" -> "is pathetic"

[p23]
"lot" -> "a lot"

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language:	english translated
parody:	danganronpa
character:	komaru naegi kyouko kirigiri makoto naegi
artist:	mackgee
male:	condom netorare sole male
female:	bondage gag schoolgirl uniform sister sole female
mixed:	incest
other:	rough grammar uncensored

[Mack] Ultimate Incest (Danganronpa) [English]

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超高校級近親相姦