yeah i commissioned this translation but another one came out before it was finished. thought I would upload anyway.

At least yours has proper typesetting, outside of the SFX which feel kind of invasive with the lack of font change and redraws and some of the moans and their giant textboxes

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A much better improvement over the other version
Yankee and delinquent girls become the most charming when shown some love...
Hopefully you’ll consider the the sequels and side story

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Wait a minute, in page 9 it says that she's done it with someone but in page 29 it says that she's never been inserted.
Is that an inconsistency or am I misunderstanding things?

@Chained Thanks for the explanation for all of this!
Also thank you to the others for clearing things up too!

Last edited on 11 June 2020, 18:24.

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It call "lying"

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WHAT BLACK MOTHER NAMES HER SON BOB
NO SERIOUSLY WHY ARE THEY ALL BOB

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@jetpack003 Using the notes at the end I like to think that she idolized the black man's dick, but wasn't prepared for it's size, so was using the dildo on page 10 to "train" herself to take it. However something must of happened and either she lost interest, or the black guy didn't reciprocate her feelings. Either way, she must have said that she fucked a black guy just to sound more experienced than she actually was.

tl;dr It's probably up to the reader's interpretation and I like to think she was just trying to sound more experienced than she actually was.

Edit: Looking at the other translation and the sequel it appears that she has had sex before and the notes at the end of this translation are probably just a mistransation. Still love her design and body type, flat chest small women need more attention in this world.

Edit 2: @sgc_geh & B1u3z Thank you both for clearing that up. Makes me like this work more now. I just wish there was a more "proper" translation of this work.

Last edited on 10 June 2020, 22:11.

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This kind of yankee waifu is underappreciated.
At least the manga Okusan have somebody like her as the main cast https://mangadex.org/title/6260/okusan (along with a voluptuous semen demon as the MC)

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The girl is cute but man, the male character is bordering on incel. Cute art though

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@DarkShadow6 I assume it's due to the cultural impact of Bob Sapp in Japan.

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@Chained She has not had sex before. An omake from her past shows that she went to a club, a black dude whipped his dick out and jacked off in front of her, but - even though she was turned on - she got scared and ran away, and nothing came of the incident. It did leave a permanent mark on her mind, though, and she became a total size queen because of that. (A point is made to mention that she tried to go back to that nightclub, but she never saw the black guy again.) Every time she tried to fuck somebody, she'd get immediately disappointed with the size, the guy would go limp from her response, and nothing would happen, so she's still a virgin (not counting dildoes) until MC here busted her o-rings.
source: https://e-hentai.org/s/4339e0d2c5/1467896-42

edit: On further examination, this translation is bad. I could ignore the flubs in the way the English is worded, but some of the important stuff is mistranslated in a way that misleads the reader about the meaning of the dialog.

e.g. on page 9, in the Japanese raws, she says "あの時の黒人にも負けてないかも" which just means "yours might be as big as that black guy from that time". The translator needlessly added their assumptions about the meaning of that statement and changed it to "the black guy I had before".

Also, all over this manga the translator continually makes the mistake of translating ビッチ as "bitch", when it's not used that way in Japanese; when they say "bitch", what they mean is "slut". Taro is assuming she's a major slut, and she doesn't help her case by acting brazenly once she finds out he's hung like a horse. Meanwhile, from the way Kurumiko acts and the line about a "black guy from back then", Taro makes the assumption that he's dealing with a slutty girl who'll bang whatever's big enough to meet her standards. Taro also isn't helped by the fact that due to his abnormal size, all his previous girlfriends freaked out and broke up with him once they saw he was too big for them to take, leaving him a virgin until he met Kurumiko as well.

tl;dr two virgins acting dumb works out alright in the end.

Last edited on 10 June 2020, 10:22.

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@Chained I think you first take is correct seeing the raws for chapter 2 part 1, it matches what is said in the notes, she was most likely bluffing. This is the purest girl obssesed with black (big) cock.
@sgc_geh explained it really well.
I really hope the sequels get translated. 3 more to go.
Edit: the bits sgc_geh just added are spot on, hopefully fixes will be made since the meaning here is really important. It's unfortunate I cannot upvote it since I already made a comment.

Last edited on 10 June 2020, 18:02.

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Only one here that after reading this version thinks that the previous one wasnt actually that bad...?

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I think this is one of the rare cases where I liked the work more before the translation...

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>anorexic
Er, was this tagged by a jelly landwhale?

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Awww fuck - I love it!

@TheMoondoggie:
Probably...for me she's just the perfect pettanko type :)

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Definitely an improvement from the other version, but the typesetting is still not good. You can see the white corners of the square in every bubble, and in the smaller ones it just overrites the entire thing.
Please if you're gonna comission something do it to anyone who is slightly more professional than this, the cost shouldn't be too different anyways.

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>anorexic
Thin enough for ribs to show through her skin in several panels.
If I wanted to fap to a girl who looked like what the "anorexic" tag would indicate, this work and the sequels would be exactly what I would want to see.

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thank you, Mr. Skeletal

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In the raw version the mc seemed to be less of a douche, here in this version hes is straight up an as*hole :/

Well either way the edning made up for it, i think. :)

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I'm usually into big honkers and thick thighs, but this series and her reactions are golden

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@ sgc_geh Spot on! Such a perfect doujin in my eyes but the translation dropped the ball( or should i say "hiked its balls" :D *leaves awkwardly*).

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This kind of girl is on the complete opposite end of my type when reading(or watching =03) hentai. I gotta admit though, the story kinda pulled me in, and I enjoyed seeing the concept of a virgin guy having sex with someone they don't really like physically, simply because all of the feelings associated with having sex. Seeing him lose control and realize the core beauty of a woman(small, soft, etc.) felt pretty realistic and relatable.

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Still need all the series translated .... :(

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this is the most weirdly wholesome shit i've fapped to and i honestly don't know how to feel

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Lmao at her calling Little Flower a horrible skill, Genthru btfo

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Wait... "sha hasn't be inserted ?" Is it a new way to say she is kinda a virgin ?

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