Hey guys,

This is my fist time posting here. I wanted to give a doujinshi a go, I've liked many artists but the stories just don't sit right with me. Please let me know from the VERY rough sketches I've posted if you think this is something worth pursuing. Also, I am not very familiar with software that helps you draw on a computer. If there is anyone out there that likes the story so far and wants to help out with refined computer drawings and coloring let me know. Please give me your honest feedback and let me know if I should continue.
Thank you,

Mr. Pheromones

If you want to give doujinshi a go, then just give it a go.. if nothing else, you will have a doujinshi that is 100% customized for your taste, which is always a good thing in my book..
the art looks quite decent, though it's hard to say with this VERY rough sketches

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https://e-hentai.org/g/1664467/04a31675f6/ better version :)

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