Translation is hard work, especially into English. Good effort at the translation, excellent artwork.

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don't mint it we just do it for fun, thank you

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Pg10 "your Virginia?"
??
This is just a dumb joke or something right?

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Holy shit this is gold. I think whoever translated this does not have the most solid grasp on the English language

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@57welder, I think you're delusional for believing this is a good effort at translating this to English. I don't understand why foreigners who isn't fluent in English bother translating to English. At least learn and understand English before you attempt to translate into it. This is so unreadable that's how bad it is.

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This is the same guy who "translated" the works by Sabashi Renya back in October last year. Surely he didn't bother to upping his skill, this translation is just as unreadable as the previous works.

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"Even though it's winter, why are you can be so openly Nee-chan!?"
The dialogue is so Shakespearean that my pea brain simply can't comprehend it.

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I've never been to Virginia.

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"Hurried up schlrp schlrp my Virginia with your penis" this translation is a masterpiece and I will not hear otherwise.

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Why not just translate the work in your native language? If you don't understand a language, don't translate into that language.

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"NOTTO DISU SHITTO AGEN!" ... (proceeds to facepalm).

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Whoever rated this more than a star deserves to be castrated.

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More than one virginia

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"Onee-chan no moso kuukan presented by BT&E(bad translator & editor)"
name checks out xD

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can you stop translating pieces of art into a garbage ?

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holey fuck. just stop.

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As much as I appreciate people devoting their personal time and effort into translating something... I'd like to suggest you get a proofreader before translating anything again.

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Some spelling/grammar issues:

[p1]
"What wrong?" -> "What's wrong?"
"Your friends has come" -> "Your friend"
"on phone" -> "on the phone"
"go home late" -> "come home late"
"by ourself" -> "by ourselves"

[p2]
"What wrong" -> "What's wrong"
"That because" -> "That's because" (?)
"it not good too" -> ???
"my sister [...] have" -> "has"
"phobia to opposite sex" -> "phobia of the opposite sex"
"While I talking" -> "While I'm talking" (?)
"will turned" -> "will turn"
"will just kept" -> "will just keep"
"until conversation ended" -> "until the conversation ends"
"Even with your little brother's opponent is also not good" -> ???
"Stoop it" -> "Stop it"

[p3]
"Uchon seems that been feeling unwell since some time ago" -> maybe "Uchon seems to have been feeling unwell for a while" (?)
"I let Uchon to lie down on bed" -> strike "to", add "on the bed"
"I just need to check her for a little" -> maybe "I just need to check on her a little" (?)

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