Type.90 delivers yet again. Looking forward to the tank versions.

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Man, this translation is rough; makes it really hard to read/enjoy

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Forget rough, this translation is pure sandpaper. We really need a language tag for when something has been translated to what is clearly someone's 3rd language, so people can start avoiding this garbo.

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Poor Grammar

Page 1:

It more than a rumor.

From now on, we looking forward to working...

Able to succeed such a difficult project

And there's more, but I don't feel like copying most of the page.

@Doodadad We have Poor Grammar, but the problem is people treat a work like it's great just because it got translated, when the work might be pretty bad and/or the translation might be pretty bad. Plenty of things no better than Laruffi's shit get an average of 4 or higher here.

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@hjerry Try imagining that It's being narrated by Arnold Schwarzenegger - everything will start making sense :)

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you probably want M:cheating or M:NTR. tags here. the girlfriend is still with the brother in the last page, and does not approve of the relationship even though she's aware of it.

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I think this is better than nothing english is noy my native language

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Even the typesetting looks rough. Like. Look at the legibility of the letters. Its all aliased for some reason.

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'English' should be a low-power tag here.

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Sister page 28

Base +6, Tofu22 +6

Where are the other raws at?

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Is this a sequel to something? It sounds as if they already had a relationship, but it's hard to be sure with this "translation".

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Raw : https://e-hentai.org/s/50acce953e/1332589-2
Chapter 2 Raw : https://e-hentai.org/s/55fc9347dd/1448051-68

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What a shitty grammar, it kills the mood, I had to dislike this shit.

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Some spelling/grammar issues:

[p1]
"It more than a rumor" -> "It's"
"we looking [...]" -> "we're looking"
"succeed" -> "successfully finish"
"it time for celebration" -> "it's time to celebrate"
"please celebrate under me" -> ??? "without me"?

[p2]
"I'm live around this area" -> ???
"He living alone after" -> "He's been living alone since"

[p3]
"my ass feel" -> "feels"
"turns to pervert" -> "becomes perverted"
"That why, I" -> "That's why I"

[p4]
"Why you hide such a things" -> "Why are you hiding such a thing"

[p5]
"I'm kind a feel of excited" -> "I'm feeling kind of excited"

[p6]
"this place only just" -> "this place was just"
"it would be feel" -> "it would feel"
"when it enter" -> maybe "when something is inserted here" (?)
"If I knew it will be this good" -> "If I had known it would be this good"

[p7]
"I want to be pervert onee-san" -> "a pervert onee-san"
"the wonderful of the ass" -> either you're missing a noun or "wonderful" should be something like "wonders"
"worrying having" -> "worrying about having"

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She ripped those panties apart with her lower leg strength alone. That woman is built different.

Also this is still NTR.

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