Hello everyone, I hope y'all doing well!

It's been quite some time since this story but it's finally here. So from now on most of my stories will connect with the main one or other secondary ones so we will have more interesting moments.

As always, do leave a comment about the episode, characters or what I could improve, to be honest I think I've improved a lot since my very first episode to these recent ones and I do read your comments to take them in consideration.

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Support me if you want with 1$, some short stories are available for that price too. And 3$ if you want to support me a liitle bit more and get extra stories per month!

Anyways, be sure to visit my PATREON since I'll have a poll there for feedback about what episodes shouls I make next month.

Until next time!

Awesome, thank you for the new chapter @Evankstein.

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Another new favorite chapter of mine! First feedback would be on the story. I could see @evankstein laying the groundwork for world building thats really neat. I appreciate that the creator doesn't use exposition scenes but lets us piece together what little we know to put the story and characters together. Good pacing and development of the MC Michaela. It feels as if the reader is going through the same journey as the MC which imo is the right way of guiding a story.

The impromptu meeting of Miccaela and Ari-el in the bath scene was absolute fire!! so hot. I love this writing and the interaction of the characters. Hmm I wish there was more of creator's signature suckling action, more tit play and lactation, and definitely more passionate kissing would be nice additions.

Overall I'm enthralled with the story. I don't know if @evankstein will read comments 2 years later but if he does I really love your work! Following you on patreon and hope you can continue with your work :3

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