RAW: https://e-hentai.org/g/1532315/5b076e9ec0/

Commissioned by CruelTax

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-Email at: megafagget@cock.li

Re-trasnslation of the first chapter because I had the whole book commissioned to me. Will be updating this gallery with new ones.

YES!!!!!!!!

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Wait a damn moment. There was a sequel for this? YES!!!!!

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Old man uses a flip phone, he must be really old.

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This artist is a pure genius... Takes talent to put in a good laugh with arousal....
Menea The Dog does not disappoint
Thanks for the retranslation... I can't wait for the sequel now...

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Isn't this already translated? Like, years ago too.

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So this is where that face came from

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@DJjames; Is it so hard to read the uploader comment? "Re-trasnslation of the first chapter because I had the whole book commissioned to me. Will be updating this gallery with new ones." It's right there. The first chapter was translated 5 years ago, but none of the following ones. It was also the magazine scan. Not that surprising new translator who had the whole tank commissioned decided to do it anyway with the tank raws.

Thanks for translating/commissioning. This artist does very interesting expressions.

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Weeeeeeee! Love it!
Thanks a bunch RogMan and CruelTax!
Her face on page 7 - just amazing!

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Bruh this is a reaction image gold mine

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Am I crazy or is this a reference to Junji Itou?

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Well, that's what tends to happen when you seriously underestimate a man's "mojo", just because he's (for all technical purposes) a "wizard" (if-you-know-what-I-mean).

"And It Is Glorious!" ...... it's also APPROVED!

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When his cock shot up and hit her on the chin on pg.6, I couldn't help but imagine a voice going "Shoryuken!".

This was a good laugh, we need more fresh fun stuff like this, and less ugly dudes "destroying innocence" and all that, that stuff is overdone, kind of the "zombies" of hentai..

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@TheDiabolical It would have been better to just take the higher quality scan and input the previous translation onto it. Because this one is not as good. The phrasing, grammar, and positioning of words in the bubbles are all of inferior quality. I'd be disappointed if i commissioned something and it wasn't even done as well as something from half a decade ago. I mean what the hell is stuff like "i felt myself too much" supposed to mean at the end of chapter 2 here? Anyone that speaks english could tell you that it should be something like "i got ahead of myself" or "i got too full of myself". It's shit like that which makes me question the validity of the translation completely. The only reason i can even say he got the gist of things is because we have the previous version and the general translations line up for the most part. But phrases like the one i mentioned make me wonder how much going forward is just going to be wrong or lost. So that's why i wondered why they uploaded that first chapter, it just makes this one look worse by comparison.

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Yep she got uppercutted by a dick and now kidney punched by her friend, this is a true fighting manga

Ah yes the [ＦＵＣＫＭＡＳＴＥＲ ＤＸ ゅ王ま]

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The story and characters is very likeable. Thanks for translating

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Chubs is a pretty great character. Slutty yet wholesome and easy to push around until she finally has enough and floors you. That body blow looked vicious.

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Dunno if you're interested in small corrections, but at the bottom of page 28, it should be "Didn't *your* mom" (not "you mom") and "Not at *school*" (not "shool"). Also, slightly nitpicking, but it should be spellt "whoa", not "woah" (e.g. page 30).

Thanks for the translation!

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Thanks for the constructive, King. Will fix it all with my next upload.

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I may be late at realizing this but im glad they have the "Domination loss" Tag now. I do enjoy those stories a lot when one person is dominating then it gets reversed by the end. Usually its funny and hot at the same time lol.

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Mizuho is like tailormade for ryona.

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They aren't in a relationship, but the Mizu girl has practically put herself in the cuck role by having the dude fuck the other girl. She really looked pissed when he commented on how great the thick girl was.

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Never seen "domination loss" before.

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The friend is fucking thick!!!

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Haven't laughed at a hentai so hard in a while! 10/10!

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what a heartwarming story about friendship and redemption

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@brandivolgio What face are you talking about?

Page 10 nipple seduction shot?
Page 9 blowjob seduction?
Page 23?

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Her name is Mizuha not Mizuho for fuck's sake.

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>domination loss
How did i not know this was a thing before

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These faces are absolutely wild, both hilarious and hot. 10/10

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Thanks for completing this tankoubon. A full domination loss tankoubon is one of a kind

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Page 41: LMAOO HAHAHA. Critical hit

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@DJjames This translation just injects more english slang than the other one. Its fine once you realize that.

Actually, when you compare the two scripts, this translation sounds more natural. I can't exactly speak to the accuracy of either as I'm not about to compare both scripts to the raw. I barely know enough kanji to get the gist but the older translation took a more direct approach whereas this one took a more liberal one. Just read the lines Mizuha spouts at the start of chapter 2 and compare it with the old one. This Mizuha sounds so much more natural.

Hell, even the summary Mizuha's friend gives on the top of page 2 of the second chapter is more natural in this translation compared to the old one. The only thing I'd complain about is the translation of Chiho. I would have kept the direct katakana translation of "Chapo" for her nickname because thats literally what katakana is for, borrowed or "foreign" words. The raw has チャポ as her nickname. If it was "Chubs" the katakana would be "チャブ” or something closer.

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チャポチャポ (though more frequently used as ポチャポチャ) is an onomatopoeia for "chubby". The use of katakana by author does not necessarily have anything to do with it being a loan word and is often just an arbitrary stylistic decision.
That, and the fact that it is a nickname, as opposed to a real one, is what motivated me to use "Chubs" instead of just going for a transliteration.

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I want to marry Chubbs

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I've noticed that pages 110 through 167 are from a completely different work. Same author though.

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So I read this and felt the dialogue often time sounds weird, incoherent, or just doesn't make sense. Around page 140 I finally decided to check the raws, and indeed, this is barely a "translation." Page 143-144, almost everything is different from what were actually said in Japanese. Not just simple "liberal translation to make it sound more natural", just completely wrong. I'm too lazy to check the previous pages but from how weird the dialogue is on the previous pages I'd guess the whole book is the same.

This should qualify as a rewrite, not a "translation"

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Cum for the porn, stay for the laughs.

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There are blank bubbles in pages 11, 52, 81,97, 177 and 183.

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Sigh, I wish I was a girl...

They just have to exist and receive pleasure. Men have to have a nice face, big dick, and give their all to make them feel several times more pleasure that they as men will ever feel. Then after the fact, it's looked at as the man should compensate the woman for allowing him to pleasure her.

Sex just seems so much funner as a female with 0 prerequisite or effort and you can even profit from it easily. It's really not fair...

...maybe it's time to start NG+ and see if I can reroll my character...

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His expressions were hilarious.

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Story is nice, girls are cute and the sex is pretty hot, easy to fap.
Only thing that really bothered me was the whole thing about Mizuha casually prostituting herself to old men... like, wtf? how do the characters just go along with it as if it was nothing?

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by far my favorite hentai , and the cutest one , cus the dude is laying pipe for the right reasons ( a cute girl he likes and she likes him back ) im on page 113 and it gets better ^__^
99 stars out of 5

MIND BREAK ???
ok i need a citation

( 145 and NOT ONE THING said mindbreak ) her body and her mind fell hard for the dude THATS IT o__________________________O

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I've just found this doujin and oh boy I was missing a lot!
This one is amazing, especially the line work when the artist wanted to convey action or expressions, it has pretty dynamic panels, how the action keeps going. How the characters interact and bounce off each other. Really glad this doujin exists. And to think this is a pretty old doujin too.

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