For my first traslation i have choose [Fuusen Club] Kan no - Arashi.
If some translations are wrong, please tell me.
This is chapter 6 of Kan no Arashi by Fuusen Club

I remember when Fuusen used to to really awesome loli work. Good times... sad they're gone.

Base +10

Don't get me wrong, I've seen worse, but I still think you should ask someone to proofread for you. Throughout the chapter there are these small mistakes that kind of distract from the story. For example, on the last page you're using a double negative in the very last speech bubble.

Base +6

This is so much better than his loli work and you just need the jist with this series, nothing real nitty gritty in the story telling.

Base +6