I promised I'd give this a proper translation, so here you go! I'm throwing in Rindou's half and the afterword too, as a bonus.

TL: cutegyaruTL (https://cutegyarutl.wordpress.com/)

Want something translated? Hit me up on:

Discord: cutegyaru#6881
Email: cutestgyaru@gmail.com

RAW: https://e-hentai.org/g/1544017/4c19514729/

EDIT2: More fixes. I'm done bro, I swear.

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Thank you for the translation.

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Based chemo translator.

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Please don't be hypnosis or mind contr- fuck.

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she's outside with that kind of outfit in the winter?! Isn't she cold?

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Dating? You mean mating

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the cover reminds me of Abubu

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Thank god, I was hoping for this ever since that other garbage “translation” dropped a while back.

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Damn, this dude waited 3 months for an oppurtunity to apply the choker, then once she was under its effects, spent an additional HALF YEAR to build their relationship?! Considering most MC users just say "Yo, bitch." and then wave a coin in front of their faces (or just POINT), this guy is DEDICATED.

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Thanks for the TL. I'd have commissioned this myself, but thanks to covid I'm out of the job until further notice, and my entertainment budget doesn't allot me to commission something this wordy.

Thank you very much

Edit: As an aside, a lot of terms don't need TL notes since most people will get what you mean. Like, we don't need the trivia on Weekly Storyland, and most people with cursory knowledge about Touhou know what the human village or an incident is.

Last edited on 21 July 2020, 11:08.

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Oh that god this came out and fucking blasted the other translation out of the sky. Who even tries to self-translate a doujin with no knowledge of the characters or the fandom in question? Good shit notrealz

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yeah, reimu is so resilient that it takes 9 months to do to her what it'd take 9 seconds to do any other character in a Hentai.

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Thanks so much for the actual translation. Blew the other one out of the water, TL notes and all. Especially impressive that you didn't know the source material from the start.

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I imagine the choker worked instantly otherwise she would have taken it off. 9 months were only used out of fear.

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He even said he'd take responsibility for knocking her up and married her @errata

I'm extremely impressed considering most MC users are pump and dump, what an ethical guy

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Surprise Keiki there on the last pages.

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@Gespens
Yeah, I guess most people with basic Touhou knowledge wouldn't need the notes. Oh well!

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@errata I mean if I had the chance to fuck and knock up Reimu I would gladly wait 9 months for it, or even longer.

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Minor mistranslation on 16.jpg :
"What!? She's saying this all on her own!?"

JP:「なんだ!? 口が勝手に!?」
EN: "What!? My mouth [is moving] on its own!?"
Marisa is the one thinking it.

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