This anime is interesting, I wanna go to the gym... uwu

Join my Discord channel for new uploads♡
https://discord.gg/pr3Dceq

And I want a gyaru

even one as slightly chubby as Hibiki

And as someone who kinda likes to cook, and does cook a bunch of different stuff (that you wouldn't necessarily expect from a Chinese-American guy), I'm kinda attracted to the idea of a gyaru who loves to eat

Base +7, Thenarfking -7, incesty -6, SenpaiNM7 -6, Marky-O -6

Takurou draw Hibiki is good but my only complain it's so short and I hope other join Hibiki.

Base +6, shuntensatsu +15

I thought machio was going to show up to either best the hell out of that guy or explain how sex is healthy

Base +7, shuntensatsu +15, Hollow_Gaea +7

RAW https://e-hentai.org/g/1477756/3197863f85/

Base +6

Knowing her appetite she's going to need way the fuck more than anything that one guy can supply.

Base +7, Badmohcine73 +7, incesty +6, shuntensatsu +15

For the future:
PLEASE use the original sized images for editing and not e-hentai's downscaled 1280px horizontal resolution images. They are for viewing and not for editing.
You can download the original sized images using one of the following methods:
1. Torrent Download (if available; WARNING torrents not always contain the latest or the full res version of a gallery. Downscaled torrents normally have 1280x in their names)
2. Archive Download (click on "Archive Download" and "Download Original Archive"; e-hentai account and some GP or Credits required)
3. The "Download Original" link at the bottom of each individual image (if there is noch such link the image on your screen and the original are identical) [e-hentai account and GP or Credits required now]

And you should also work on your typesetting. It's not completely bad but not very good either.
I suggest you find a font that's not that bold. Good free fonts are Anime Ace, Wurper Comics, Wurmics Bravo or Komika. You can download them for free at sites like dafont.com.
The 2nd advice is to reduce the font size a bit. Don't use all of the space and give your text some room to breath. That should also make it a bit easier for you to shape the text in the bubbles. As a rule of thumb try to shape it like an oval. It won't always work and sometimes it's even impossible but it should give you a genral idea of how to shape your text.
And finally you should also pay more attention to cleaning the bubbles because in here are lots of remains from japanese text.

Base +16, dankestdungeon +18, Hollow_Gaea +7, alllifeinfate +6, Megaton +45, nikgtasa +12

Thanks for the release, but two pieces of advice:
1) Consider picking a different font, this one has way too much vertical space between lines( or just set the spacing appropriately in your image editing program if it's got the option). Otherwise you're just making your work harder... And no, despite what one would think at first, you don't have to fill the whole bubble; quite the contrary in fact, usual advice for typesetters is to leave some breathing space around your text.
2) Start with the right raw; the original was 1400x2000, the 1280x1800 version you used is intended for gallery viewing only and not for editing, because apart from the smaller size it's been saved at 80% quality so with noticeable compression artifacts. Unfortunately that 1280x version is the only one aggregators scrape, so in case you've got the raw from other sites like e.g. NH-dot-net I'd advise stopping using them as a raw source, and download directly from here (there are torrents and archive download links) thus skipping the middleman.

Base +25, dankestdungeon +18, Hollow_Gaea +7, alllifeinfate +6, Quartz Saint +6, Megaton +45

@ghost_of_sanakan

Do you just want a tanned girl or a gyaru? Cuz Sakura doesn't act like the stereotypical gyaru in any way, shape, or form.

Base +6

Sigh. Why does the male have to look so ridiculous when you've made all this effort to draw a curvy, luscious looking Hibiki?

Base +6, fap222222 +6, alcantarilla +9, SeptimustheSeventh +3

@Brego1
Self-inserting purposes for the audience. Apparently Japanese society hasn't degenerated enough by feminist influence for attractive guys to look for porn instead of getting laid out of fear of getting #MeToo'd.

Base +6