Aside from the stilted English, wrong words; the stark, sans-serif type font, the complete lack of punctuation and the non-centered text, the editing isn't bad.
The real problem is that three of the tags are wrong, and should be voted down... They are: Tag "big ass". Her ass is not "...at least 2.5 times the size of the person's head."[Wiki] (Don't confuse perspective with size)... Tag "big breasts". [Wiki(edited)] "Each breast should consistently be at least as big as the person's head." They are not... Tag "impregnation". [Wiki(snipped and edited)] There is no verbal assertion that the character is actually pregnant, and no image showing impregnation actually occurring...