Why is this a rewrite?
Why is it rated as high as it is being a rewrite?
Where is the original?

Base +5, ulquiorra151 +8

Chu Berozu (チューべろーず)
https://e-hentai.org/s/f9407ae6c3/97522-32

Base +13, Hitsuyou-H +30

Aside from the stilted English, wrong words; the stark, sans-serif type font, the complete lack of punctuation and the non-centered text, the editing isn't bad.

The real problem is that three of the tags are wrong, and should be voted down...
They are:
Tag "big ass". Her ass is not "...at least 2.5 times the size of the person's head."[Wiki] (Don't confuse perspective with size)...
Tag "big breasts". [Wiki(edited)] "Each breast should consistently be at least as big as the person's head." They are not...
Tag "impregnation". [Wiki(snipped and edited)] There is no verbal assertion that the character is actually pregnant, and no image showing impregnation actually occurring...

Needs work...

Base +11