reupload with missing page 25

raw: https://e-hentai.org/g/1688161/e594101400/

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Oh i see Mosu followers are popping up and that is a great thing.

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This one is missing the last page 25 of the raw at https://e-hentai.org/g/1688161/e594101400/
Since that page has no translated text, maybe that is why it mistakenly didn't get included in here.
It is a nice ending to the story though.

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Why not use the original RAW quality? Page 25 is the only one that retains it's original quality while others are in lower resolutions.

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checked with amazon and they do apparently sell sexy cowgirl bikini costumes. though most don't seem to have the gloves and none of them have the bell.

the bell seemed to lose continuity sometimes it disappears.

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@Red 255
Closest thing I could find on Amazon JP was this: https://www.amazon.co.jp/dp/B07XY9KR9J

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The cover made me think this was an Uzaki-chan doujin.

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besides the sample resolution which other has pointed out, there are a few glaring errors.
The vertical ellipsis is painful to look at.
There is a missing bubble on page 04.
Page 05:
"Can you really do this" -> Can you really do the stuff in that book?"
Page 09:
"Uo, don't push so hard. you like kissing like that?" -> "Whoa, why'd you tighten up all of a sudden? Do you like kissing that much?"
"That's..." > "N-no, that's not-"
Page 18, 2nd panel: that "Nmm" should be "spluurt", don't know how you mixed them up.
Page 20, 5th panel "so good" > "I love you."
There are more but these are the most noticeable one.

Last edited on 04 August 2020, 07:19.

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@dankestdungeon
I appreciate the feedback! We're definitely still amateurs at this.
For page 05, I chose to omit the book subject because it felt redundant to bring it up twice (it does come across with a different connotation though).
Shitty misread on pg 09.
Your translation on page 24 seems wrong though. It's pretty clear from context she's responding to not being able to go home.

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Thank you. This is quite similar to Great Mosu's style.

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oh right, my mistake on page 24 line.

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Ahh the Great Mating Press :D

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Straight up tracing and I don't mind at all.

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I love tomboys <3

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This is EXTREMELY similar to Great Mosu's workk, and even some pages are exactly the same with same positiuons and stuff. Weird.

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@sterev
On page 24, it's the guy receive a phone call. His parents are away (as said at the start of the story) and story proceeds. They finish and he offers to walk her home, she says sure, but then he gets a phone call and says to her, "Hold on, the phone's ringing....", and then he says "Eh? It's looking like you're not going to (be able to) come home just yet?" to his parents. She was walking to the door and heard that, so then she lets go of the handle and turns back.

Also slightly related, on page 2, she didn't "hear" that his parents would be away, he just told her. That 「へー」 is like "Oh~?" expressing surprise at something she just learned, followed by her repeating what he told her "So your folks went on a trip...".

Last edited on 06 August 2020, 04:02.

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She may not be Uzaki, but it's not like my eye sight is going to go above her neck anyway, so who cares?

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