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(C95) [Umi no Sachi (Suihei Sen)] D-SCALE [English] [Confidential TL]

(C95) [うみのさち (水平線)] D-SCALE [英訳]

Doujinshi
Posted:2020-08-09 11:06
Parent:None
Visible:Yes
Language:English  RW
File Size:79.75 MiB
Length:26 pages
Favorited:662 times
Rating:
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Average: 4.11

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Posted on 09 August 2020, 11:06 by:   bigbro000    PM
Uploader Comment
I was intrigued by the art and tried translating it. It turned out to be sadder than I thought. Originally, we tried to color it but turned out we weren't ready for that yet. I hope you still can enjoy it, have a nice day! :)

Confidential TL
Credits to:
BigBro000 (translator + type-setter)
ZeroEmpathy (editor + cleaner + proof-reader)

RAW: https://e-hentai.org/g/1340645/a8b4641454
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Posted on 09 August 2020, 12:22 by:   Dr.Pavel    PM
Score +31
It hurts...just a bit...
Posted on 09 August 2020, 13:04 by:   Badumpo    PM
Score +20
Dude, no pls no, dont go that route, just because senpai disappointed you, you dont have to go the same route. Dont continue this endless circle of sadness
Posted on 09 August 2020, 14:49 by:   dankestdungeon    PM
Score +406
Thanks for another Rewrite bro.
By the way after skimming through this, I wish you did use google translate because it somehow would probably be better than you.

raw link so you can see the raw and check the "translation" for yourself.
https://e-hentai.org/g/1340645/a8b4641454

The rest are way worse, so I'm only gonna list out the mistakes on the first few pages because it's bad enough already.

Page 3, Panel 5:
She's like a painting a masterpiece // she's beautiful
> She's beautiful, almost as if waiting for someone // to draw her into a painting. (how did you change the meaning is just too beautiful way better than Jk Rowling.)

Page 4, Panel 2:
"You and Izumi-senpai are members of the art club, aren't you?"
> Don't "what" me. You like your art club's Izumi-senpai, right?

は!?ち。。。ちげーよ
somehow got morphed into "Yeah, so?" (Not gonna give a fix for this if you made a mistake on this line I suggest you should re-learn japanese before translating ever again.)

"She has an adult charm"
>Well, I do understand you. She gives off really adult vibes.
Missing translation. (can't read handwriting, huh? Not a surprise. Don't worry, if you know japanese you can read jp handwriting.)

Page 4, Panel 03:
I liked her but I decided to give it up.
>But you should give up.

Page 4, panel 6:
Eh? Where are you going?
>Huh? Are you going already?

You don't have club activity today, do you?
>There aren't any club activities today, so are you stopping by the arcade on your way back?

I just want to clear my head.
>I'll be doing some practice on my own.

Page 5:
Everyone is just envious
>Everyone just says what they like.

I also don't know what kind of person senpai really is (missing meaning too)
>... I've only gazed at Senpai from afar, so I don't know anything about her...

Page 8:
How cute...// Am I that interesting? ( you somehow misread 面白い into 可愛い)
should be something like:
>What an interesting kid you are. // Watching someone like me...
Last edited on 09 August 2020, 16:46.
Posted on 09 August 2020, 23:04 by:   Red 255    PM
Score +65
interpretation, she was lactating, I imagine she disappeared because she got pregnant and dropped out of school, with some other dudes baby.
Posted on 10 August 2020, 10:36 by:   MHM-2015    PM
Score +13
"DAYUM, ... Dat's Some Deep Shit!" And if one is not careful, the cycle is about to take place again.
Posted on 10 August 2020, 17:22 by:   jualsempolan    PM
Score +79
most suihei sen work is always lactating even not pregnant
Posted on 15 August 2020, 17:44 by:   walkerriley    PM
Score -60
@dankestdungeon

I think you misinterpreted 'interpretation' as 'rewrite'.

A rewrite would be if he changed them to be brother and sister secretly having sex in the art room.

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