English Translation of Mitsumine Daydream
There are maybe some bad translation but I hope you enjoy it
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RAW: https://e-hentai.org/g/1599297/b0b2af7c78/

hayo danan aku tau ini punyamu

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yes benar ini punyaku

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I can clearly see English is not a language you are fluent in at all. Please refrain from TLing in a language you are not capable of. It ruins the chances of a real TL coming around.

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Yes. Although there's literally no doujin of Yuika Mitsumine ever translated here for months or a year. I'll be happy if someone do commission to professional translator group and take over this project if they want to.
And thanks for the critique. I'll strive to be better at understanding English.

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Geez dude, you are fine. Even if you missed some high-level joke or idiom it doesn't matter since it's an alright translation, which is better than nothing.

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Rough grammar
p4 just enter -> just entered
lazying -> lazing
a greedy -> greedy
time when -> times when
isn't it -> wasn't
p5 at office -> at the office
p6 for doing -> having
racing -> race
p7 with outfit -> in an outfit
p9 about buying -> buying
sleep too -> sleep either
like baby -> like a baby
p11 brush the teeth -> brush my teeth
time i'll -> time comes

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