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Doujinshi
Posted:2020-08-16 16:23
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Posted on 16 August 2020, 16:23 by:   satoritokoishi    PM
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Posted on 16 August 2020, 03:09 by:   121132805592ae    PM
Score -59
賢王已經百級五寶滿絆滿金芙
什麼時候來把咕噠的菊花也收下吧!
Posted on 16 August 2020, 03:14 by:   肆虐Monster    PM
Score +68
hhhhh好出戏啊
Posted on 16 August 2020, 03:14 by:   招架不住    PM
Score +717
在?为什么不与贤王击剑
Posted on 16 August 2020, 03:17 by:   skyviewer    PM
Score +439
女子 ! 金闪闪终于干回老本行了
Posted on 16 August 2020, 03:25 by:   mapo    PM
Score +92
所以說還拯不拯救人理了?
Posted on 16 August 2020, 03:34 by:   unknownuser0    PM
Score +663
这就是最强黄毛🐴
Posted on 16 August 2020, 03:35 by:   therethere    PM
Score +431
畢竟是幹出獨佔全國女人初夜權的最古最強黃毛,所以當踏進城裡的那一刻就已經算數了

@招架不住
想擊劍也得看好感度高不高
恩奇度的好感度不必多說,聖娼美貌又能自由變形,可男可女要巨要貧玩法無窮
白野獻出三道令咒才達成跟時臣好感度差不多的開局,再歷經堪比老虎道場的重重磨難才獲得擊劍/被插資格
反觀像這樣在殿前不低頭不送禮不效忠還開口就要聖杯,能留住小命就已經是王的慈悲了
Posted on 16 August 2020, 03:35 by:   super tank    PM
Score +106
贤王这身肌肉,我好了!放开那个茄子和我来!(
Posted on 16 August 2020, 03:35 by:   八咫金乌    PM
Score +97
某种意义上变年轻的金先生
Posted on 16 August 2020, 03:38 by:   wsx300123    PM
Score -89
給賢王幹不是NTR 他才是主人公
Posted on 16 August 2020, 03:38 by:   704582374    PM
Score +305
玛修和闪闪,怪异的组合,NTR的感觉也不够
Posted on 16 August 2020, 03:38 by:   gr8sue    PM
Score +781
贤王处理公务已经很累了,贤王没有多余的精力啪啪,不要再迫害贤王了(无端)
Posted on 16 August 2020, 03:43 by:   fakebaby    PM
Score -21
现在注册的账号已经进不了里站了吗?
Posted on 16 August 2020, 03:46 by:   GundamGN001    PM
Score +79
把C闪随便换个无脸男也行啊,总感觉很别扭
Posted on 16 August 2020, 03:50 by:   asd9792628    PM
Score +465
不论剧情,黑皮,异域风情的茄子🐍爆,不过这样搞,不是加速贤王的过劳死吗?到时候去了阴间,谁去救啊。

还有按剧情发展,梅林老sp用千里眼看到不对劲肯定会把御主一行人转移走,还有闪闪要是这么干,王哈桑早就砍了他的头了(违抗天命),不可能发生这种事情吧,倒不如说贤王因为某些原因,意识和a闪时期进行了交换,算了,看本子不应该带脑子
Last edited on 16 August 2020, 15:39.
Posted on 16 August 2020, 03:54 by:   121132805592ae    PM
Score +80
@therethere

>白野獻出三道令咒才達成跟時臣好感度差不多的開局,再歷經堪比老虎道場的重重磨難才獲得擊劍/被插資格

按照原作,白野的擊劍/被插資格也是純粹你的腦補,和這篇同人的NTR設定一個等級
不要暗度陳倉啦白野廚,不覺得跑其他角色的漫畫底下發自己的洗腦包很KY嗎
Posted on 16 August 2020, 03:56 by:   heaven feel    PM
Score -4
这就是NRT的味道吗?不喜欢的角色加上不喜欢的英灵居然能产生这么大的冲击,最后又有厨子们的别扭言论,这真是……
Posted on 16 August 2020, 04:01 by:   KeoghLee    PM
Score +315
说实话,牛肉丸多来几张可以吗,谢谢茄子
Posted on 16 August 2020, 04:04 by:   kawakazefbk    PM
Score +3
之后的剧情大概是C闪在与金固击剑后收服金固,然后通过金固制服了戈尔贡。最终通过透批制服了羽蛇神、伊斯塔和艾蕾。好了,乌鲁克被拯救了,没有人牺牲,皆大欢喜,皆大欢喜。
<br>唉?好像咕哒夫有些难过,那没有关系的,为了大义而牺牲吧()
Posted on 16 August 2020, 04:05 by:   704582374    PM
Score -32
这作者一定是个闪黑
Posted on 16 August 2020, 04:11 by:   二苇渡江    PM
Score +3
来了来了
Posted on 16 August 2020, 04:13 by:   lomorobin    PM
Score +70
不愧是人類最古黃毛
Posted on 16 August 2020, 04:16 by:   asd9792628    PM
Score +127
把咕哒夫换成咕哒子,就是另一个结局了。
Posted on 16 August 2020, 04:17 by:   theBADguy    PM
Score +511
艾蕾:“所以你是啪啪啪过多而死掉了?”
贤王:“...是的。”
艾蕾:“你是笨蛋吗?”
Posted on 16 August 2020, 04:22 by:   berserker Alduin    PM
Score -3
焦裕禄要在床上枯竭而亡了(笑)
Posted on 16 August 2020, 04:22 by:   leiyux    PM
Score +4
nga看到有人水过来看了一哈,感觉很受用
Posted on 16 August 2020, 04:24 by:   二苇渡江    PM
Score +7
西杜丽居然只露脸不做事!不能忍!
Posted on 16 August 2020, 04:26 by:   亚瑟2017    PM
Score +98
ntr……还行但闪闪玛修我实在啃不来
Posted on 16 August 2020, 04:28 by:   key1900    PM
Score +17
那过劳死的时候 谁去救?
Posted on 16 August 2020, 04:32 by:   xb100572655    PM
Score +125
贤王闪对于女人真没啥兴趣😂每天石板都看不过来,没打过第七章的建议先云一下,不要因为本子把贤王黑了。不过本子确实社保。
Posted on 16 August 2020, 04:42 by:   lzkid    PM
Score +6
草 生了出来
Posted on 16 August 2020, 04:45 by:   tomisworking    PM
Score +115
金闪闪干起了黄毛反派的老本行
Posted on 16 August 2020, 04:50 by:   kurumi爱吐槽    PM
Score +61
⏩到贤王过劳死

(没有希朵丽的画面好遗憾啊)
Posted on 16 August 2020, 04:52 by:   Tech Genus    PM
Score +32
这是偷税闪吧
Posted on 16 August 2020, 04:52 by:   斜光丶    PM
Score +4
群里有人提了一嘴儿就来看看,没想到当上贤王的金先生还对女人有兴趣233
Posted on 16 August 2020, 05:03 by:   cyxmaybe    PM
Score +215
色是很色,只是这剧情有股高尔夫球味。。
Posted on 16 August 2020, 05:05 by:   Griend1214    PM
Score +7
这汉化也太快了吧
Posted on 16 August 2020, 05:12 by:   xxsyyk    PM
Score +188
虽然完全摒弃了设定。。。但是以金闪闪那种恶劣性格做出这种事情我并不吃惊
Posted on 16 August 2020, 05:18 by:   zxc87171    PM
Score +138
若是弓閃我不意外 術閃就很意外 看他在做覺得下一頁艾蕾就抓他下去.....
Posted on 16 August 2020, 05:29 by:   shenming805711519    PM
Score +7
咕哒夫不行,还是要人类恶手撕一波,鸡儿都能给你掰了,撕下一层血肉皮
Posted on 16 August 2020, 05:31 by:   meltang    PM
Score +2
怎么这本汉化这么快,隔壁doll play的几天没见影
Posted on 16 August 2020, 05:34 by:   wdmzjwyc    PM
Score +6
光速翻译还行,果然yd老师够火
Posted on 16 August 2020, 05:45 by:   鸗驡巃    PM
Score +83
想看牛若丸……
Posted on 16 August 2020, 05:47 by:   dahakas    PM
Score +186
现在闪闪已经成搞笑角色了,看他的本子感觉就和看小刚本子一样
Posted on 16 August 2020, 05:59 by:   真是个好人    PM
Score +4
现在说到金闪闪,我就想到小夫,我都快得小夫PTSD了
Posted on 16 August 2020, 05:59 by:   dahakas    PM
Score +2
话说是死命令吗,现在人人都得来本ntr
Posted on 16 August 2020, 06:00 by:   Eru_Tears    PM
Score +12
光速汉化
Posted on 16 August 2020, 06:05 by:   gaoda    PM
Score +211
在世纪危机来临之际还在沉迷打炮的吉尔伽美什是屑
Posted on 16 August 2020, 06:08 by:   yx8781098    PM
Score +7
怪怪的。。。。贤闪当黄毛还是驾驭不住。不过就看看小茄子就完事了
Posted on 16 August 2020, 06:08 by:   ssn21    PM
Score +374
反過來了吧 再怎麼看 賭注都應該是藤丸才對啊
人類最後的御主在從者的面前被搞得汁水淋漓
像母豬一樣喊著主人饒命
這比起搞瑪修 不是更來得屈辱嗎?
Posted on 16 August 2020, 06:14 by:   鹿岛的小袜子    PM
Score +5
本来色茄子画得好好的,一进评论区就看到大家在讨论金闪闪,瞬间变成搞笑漫画
Posted on 16 August 2020, 06:16 by:   hpddm    PM
Score +7
原来如此。。这才想起来闪闪也是黄毛,yd老师发现了盲点
Posted on 16 August 2020, 06:17 by:   InnocentCrow    PM
Score +79
别说,第二幕小茄子的装扮确实社保
Posted on 16 August 2020, 06:18 by:   江ノ島盾子    PM
Score +125
虽然YD画得很顶但这对真的不太吃,NTR味也不足,还不如让乌鲁克路人来干
Posted on 16 August 2020, 06:23 by:   Faul0    PM
Score +78
虽然但是,yd画得太顶了,还是标准的ntr。
但是这个组合怎么看怎么奇怪
Posted on 16 August 2020, 06:29 by:   aiyuu    PM
Score +12
金闪闪不是bl男主吗?
Posted on 16 August 2020, 06:34 by:   Gulaguai    PM
Score +7
后面两划令咒用到哪了?
Posted on 16 August 2020, 06:37 by:   875402959@qq.com    PM
Score +2
咕哒夫也太惨了吧
Posted on 16 August 2020, 06:53 by:   yueyeyuefengkuang    PM
Score +5
人物皮肤和服装上的颜色一对比很奇怪
Posted on 16 August 2020, 06:55 by:   Benisyoga    PM
Score +2
人类史上最古的黄毛(笑)
Posted on 16 August 2020, 06:59 by:   gentle1080    PM
Score +8
感觉这是a闪会干的事,c闪没精力做吧
Posted on 16 August 2020, 07:01 by:   阿礼酱    PM
Score +1
我都可以,毕竟牛头人嘛QWQ
Posted on 16 August 2020, 07:02 by:   wkkiop    PM
Score +46
等一波咕哒夫联合提妈灭世
Posted on 16 August 2020, 07:27 by:   alldeadness    PM
Score +81
这纯粹是为了牛而牛,你把贤王换成小兵或者魔兽我都不觉得出戏。不过抛开剧情yd老师画风确实社保
Posted on 16 August 2020, 07:32 by:   二苇渡江    PM
Score +3
带着面纱口这件事还是西杜丽更看着舒服些
Posted on 16 August 2020, 07:32 by:   hentaianimedownloads    PM
Score +5
想看闪闪和尼禄本
Posted on 16 August 2020, 07:54 by:   shatan6    PM
Score +6
更想看c闪闪x西朵丽,面纱还是西朵丽开味
Posted on 16 August 2020, 08:05 by:   caiji114514    PM
Score +3
很有感觉!有没有咕哒子x贤王
Posted on 16 August 2020, 08:29 by:   a18168307    PM
Score +4
这咕哒夫一见面就这么耿是怎么到第七章的?怕不是第二章就没了
Posted on 16 August 2020, 08:39 by:   hentaiXYZ    PM
Score +24
第二幕马修这种装扮有关键词吗?很急很关键!
Posted on 16 August 2020, 08:39 by:   wtwt123    PM
Score +172
看了这本我才知道,原来画风的极致真的可以弥补剧情的不足(褒义)
Posted on 16 August 2020, 08:50 by:   菜鸟猎人互啄    PM
Score -18
说句实话,我第一感觉是羡慕,谁不想和有八块腹肌的贤王闪啪啪啪呢?😋放开那个闪闪,让我来!!!
Posted on 16 August 2020, 09:13 by:   八怜奈    PM
Score +4
怪怪的组合,用不起来啊
Posted on 16 August 2020, 09:33 by:   wczyd    PM
Score +5
啊好险,差点忘了fsn原设金闪闪就是个中二病黄毛。虽说ooc是同人的一环不爽不要看,但接受了fgo后再看这个剧情可是真的冲不起来了。
Posted on 16 August 2020, 09:36 by:   Jasondkdkndk    PM
Score +63
啊这,其实我还挺想看牛肉丸的
Posted on 16 August 2020, 10:11 by:   Gm010    PM
Score +74
恭賀金皮卡幹回老本行
Posted on 16 August 2020, 10:58 by:   吴家轩    PM
Score +2
肯定是因为小太刀的改编,不过也是吐槽第七章还是玛修一人单挑吧,我们master不应该是孔明,梅林加上一个红卡打手爆破过关吗?
Posted on 16 August 2020, 11:12 by:   岛市药太郎    PM
Score +1
c闪x玛修是真的不舒服
Posted on 16 August 2020, 11:33 by:   hentai10268    PM
Score -53
看得真爽,我的王请赶快把那色情的茄子没日没夜的操死她
很久没看到那么爽的本子了,御主绝望的表情看的令我大快人心
闪闪操茄子神作 爽
Posted on 16 August 2020, 11:37 by:   qazwsx123010    PM
Score +97
这种屑闪,被金固爆菊花,请
Posted on 16 August 2020, 11:47 by:   xie231287587    PM
Score +7
为啥没人吐槽牛肉丸和C闪呢
Posted on 16 August 2020, 12:20 by:   kuluzero    PM
Score +11
好!有牛肉丸……等一下 p4右下怎么没手套了?原来你是高潮一次就会少一件衣物的英灵啊!
Posted on 16 August 2020, 12:33 by:   霞先生    PM
Score +184
金闪闪终于回归本源了,这才是最初我认识的那个企图强奸saber的人渣
Posted on 16 August 2020, 12:35 by:   adhzn    PM
Score +77
藤丸:这乌鲁克不救也罢
Posted on 16 August 2020, 13:02 by:   FateYe    PM
Score +15
这个就图个乐,看看异域风情的玛修就行了
Posted on 16 August 2020, 13:17 by:   二苇渡江    PM
Score +0
虽然茄子和皮卡的本子有点违和。但是!茄子被扯着头发后入也太棒了吧!把面纱盖在肉棒上口交也太棒了吧!穿着踩脚袜黑皮的茄子也太色了吧!口交之后面纱轻轻滑过肉棒的分镜也太棒了吧!最后一页茄子原本提上去的过膝袜被折腾得堆了下去也太棒了吧!日着牛肉丸看书也太爽了吧!跪在地上委曲求全,目的却没达成还白白被摁在地上摩擦了一炮也太棒了吧!yd大大也太懂了吧!三十页的全彩也太强了吧!等等西杜丽你在干什么啊!你咋还不上啊!就等着你啦!算了剧情算个屁啊!yd赛高不就行了吗!
Posted on 16 August 2020, 13:32 by:   saber俺の嫁    PM
Score +117
这样的乌鲁克有什么拯救的必要吗?毁灭 请(无慈悲)
Posted on 16 August 2020, 13:42 by:   pumbit    PM
Score +2
这个衣服好棒
Posted on 16 August 2020, 13:52 by:   zyy120    PM
Score +7
这个的ntr感觉太奇怪了,术闪太帅了,看着都像是乙女本子了,但是后面的黑皮小茄子真是太色了,蒙面口交真的是色死了
Posted on 16 August 2020, 14:19 by:   972268157@qq.com    PM
Score +6
金闪闪没内味
Posted on 16 August 2020, 14:24 by:   424736192az    PM
Score +24
不像是看ntr 更像是闪闪x马修乱拉cp的本子 感到不适。不如把闪闪换成肥大叔或着路人黄毛
Posted on 16 August 2020, 14:50 by:   虚伪的加冕    PM
Score +304
画的好色,但是这个角色配置实在太奇怪了,因为过分ooc,比起NTR反而贤王闪的违和感更严重……就好像人在印度,老婆被人寝取的时候突然发现黄毛居然是川普,突然就觉得女人那边无关紧要了。
Posted on 16 August 2020, 15:08 by:   fangcccc    PM
Score +118
干是干的挺嗨的,但把咕哒得罪了你乌鲁克也要完啊,这闪闪成吴三桂了,要美人不要江山啊(๑′°︿°๑)

两天后
咕哒:提妈,this way
Posted on 16 August 2020, 16:14 by:   魔性之潮    PM
Score +8
虽然很对不起yd老师,但是这剧情实在是太怪了。
Posted on 16 August 2020, 16:17 by:   mrluxing    PM
Score +6
最强黄毛
Posted on 16 August 2020, 16:26 by:   sleepyo    PM
Score +6
這就是你過勞死的原因嗎?
Posted on 16 August 2020, 16:43 by:   DDT101    PM
Score +12
重點不是個性,那個時間點,閃閃忙到連尻一槍的時間力氣都沒有,哪有時間打炮啊
而且打炮這種耗體力的事,做了豈不是加速過勞嗎
Posted on 16 August 2020, 17:42 by:   746814350@qq.com    PM
Score +12
来一本牛若丸的本子,求你嗷!
Posted on 16 August 2020, 17:55 by:   Takanashibrs    PM
Score +6
确实别扭啊,不过yd还是永远的神
Posted on 16 August 2020, 18:00 by:   Mbh7267890    PM
Score -22
ntr最棒了
Posted on 16 August 2020, 18:03 by:   lanmingming    PM
Score +2
闪闪也太出戏了哈哈哈为什么这么好笑
Posted on 16 August 2020, 18:07 by:   byh1219    PM
Score +6
还是和咕哒子肉搏比较自然点
Posted on 16 August 2020, 18:18 by:   ZHJ2077    PM
Score +17
用术闪闪当黄毛,违和感实在是太重了(虽然是老本行),不过色茄子这身阿拉伯风情趣内衣加黑皮的组合实在是太色了,完美击中我的XP,不愧是YD老湿,tql
Posted on 16 August 2020, 18:48 by:   Sam大叔    PM
Score +8
贤王都要过劳死了,才不会想着社保呢,你说是弓闪倒还行,毕竟是没收敛以前的lsp
Posted on 16 August 2020, 19:18 by:   liwuef    PM
Score +6
这个面纱,yd真懂啊
Posted on 16 August 2020, 19:50 by:   yakamaxi    PM
Score -17
咕哒子和马修双飞她不赞吗
Posted on 16 August 2020, 20:07 by:   wj12240522    PM
Score +11
因為閃閃比較像臭甲 這本就看起來違和感很重了
Posted on 16 August 2020, 20:45 by:   qq656856364    PM
Score +46
利用全知全能的能力就为了做这种事情,吉尔伽美什,现在的你,真的很卑鄙
Posted on 16 August 2020, 21:49 by:   Godseye    PM
Score +9
玛修是不是快成本子王了?XD
Posted on 16 August 2020, 22:00 by:   emwertyuio    PM
Score +4
我觉得楼上说得对,起码最后闪闪把藤丸也上了才是真正的🐮头人
Posted on 16 August 2020, 22:00 by:   BearingZC    PM
Score +15
这怕不是连戈尔贡那关都挺不过去就亡国了
Posted on 17 August 2020, 00:04 by:   The_Big_Doge    PM
Score +6
yd老师 yyds (人类最古黄毛也太草了)
Posted on 17 August 2020, 02:04 by:   vividmao    PM
Score +21
贤王很累,贤王不想啪啪啪,贤王只想每天多睡一会儿觉,多摸一会儿鱼,可是你们有关心过贤王的身体健康吗?没有!你们只关心自己!
Posted on 17 August 2020, 02:11 by:   Daive Swift    PM
Score +12
好奇怪的感觉啊我贤王还是五宝310的这。。
Posted on 17 August 2020, 02:16 by:   JXR    PM
Score -4
这里环境好点,pixiv里刚放出几张图的时候喷yd的人比这多多了
Posted on 17 August 2020, 02:24 by:   七夜暗森    PM
Score +20
七章術閃已經是老人家了,每天爆肝處理政務
還要他當黃毛怕是要馬上風了
Posted on 17 August 2020, 02:24 by:   A1l8i8c4e    PM
Score +8
把贤王换成士兵会不会好点
Posted on 17 August 2020, 02:33 by:   ehtdbnf645    PM
Score +12
太过于出戏,导致冲不了
Posted on 17 August 2020, 02:40 by:   popoioi23    PM
Score +5
这黄毛啊,不亏
Posted on 17 August 2020, 02:56 by:   sqdqzz117    PM
Score +3
那我知道为什么会过劳死了
Posted on 17 August 2020, 03:02 by:   A000Z    PM
Score +13
总感觉略生草,不过黑皮玛修真的社保
Posted on 17 August 2020, 04:19 by:   夏未夏末    PM
Score +0
闪闪又帅又霸气 完全没有凌辱的感觉
Posted on 17 August 2020, 04:30 by:   9CJ8E    PM
Score +0
贤王和玛修的话……总有种贤王才是被透的那个的感觉
Posted on 17 August 2020, 04:36 by:   fanshu22    PM
Score +8
笑得冲不出来啦哈哈哈哈哈哈哈哈哈哈
Posted on 17 August 2020, 05:08 by:   KUNSD    PM
Score +8
虽然本子要不带脑子看,但总感觉违和感太重,怪怪的,可能换个a闪或路人来会好些,画的很社保就是了
Posted on 17 August 2020, 05:10 by:   血鹦鹉    PM
Score +6
啊这蛮怪的
Posted on 17 August 2020, 05:22 by:   ztl1156064273    PM
Score +6
乌鲁克岂是如此不便之物?
Posted on 17 August 2020, 06:13 by:   Sunan666    PM
Score +60
提妈,this way
Posted on 17 August 2020, 06:26 by:   SakuraniwaYuhan    PM
Score -1
这算不算ntr啊
Posted on 17 August 2020, 07:12 by:   luonan1995    PM
Score +20
明明很色却很古怪是怎么回事?
谜之违和感,却又不违和,因为这位兄弟只是干回老本行罢了。
Posted on 17 August 2020, 07:18 by:   daofeng325    PM
Score +6
贤王莫名感觉不对味
大概ooc太重了?
Posted on 17 August 2020, 08:47 by:   afterthat    PM
Score +4
YD,永远的神!
Posted on 17 August 2020, 10:20 by:   d8047905b    PM
Score +6
謝謝翻譯組
Posted on 17 August 2020, 10:25 by:   RLD49    PM
Score +1
闪闪已经全卖了,fgo里男的除了孔明梅林老福就没人在我手里活下来过
Posted on 17 August 2020, 10:51 by:   tyughj1228    PM
Score +13
非常OOC但是看得爽啊 后边玛修那一身我TM社保
Posted on 17 August 2020, 12:09 by:   Chenguangqua    PM
Score -4
多来点这种从者之间的啊,豪放的各位英雄们开个群p会很稀奇吗?我很想看各种英灵间的啊
Posted on 17 August 2020, 12:17 by:   Mildew444    PM
Score +7
全彩 TM直接射爆
Posted on 17 August 2020, 12:33 by:   psy413    PM
Score +6
这种踩脚哇好瑟琴啊,能多点足部描写就好了
Posted on 17 August 2020, 13:24 by:   随意而为    PM
Score +2
人类最古的黄毛,虽然ooc啦,,不过,,想想好像也是a闪会干出来的事
Posted on 17 August 2020, 13:55 by:   ruokr    PM
Score +12
啊这,我甚至没硬起来......这两也太奇怪了!!!
Posted on 17 August 2020, 14:31 by:   tosaka456    PM
Score +13
c闪腹击拳直接联想到原版七章剧情的c闪腹肌被巨人踹了
Posted on 17 August 2020, 14:58 by:   abc445473654    PM
Score +18
在?给我五分钟我去个人空间换个性别再来怎么样
Posted on 17 August 2020, 15:36 by:   shirakiin123    PM
Score +4
虽然很🐍 但我还是好出戏 hhh
Posted on 17 August 2020, 15:54 by:   路过活人    PM
Score +7
人类最古黄毛
Posted on 17 August 2020, 16:03 by:   vhbch    PM
Score +8
过于出戏以至于冲不出来(扶额笑哭)
Posted on 17 August 2020, 18:27 by:   water1551    PM
Score +9
闪闪过劳死的原因找到了
Posted on 18 August 2020, 04:03 by:   aaron2020    PM
Score +6
我想看击剑,gkd
Posted on 18 August 2020, 05:00 by:   shenshi10086sa    PM
Score -7
贤王风评大被害哈哈哈哈,我咕哒岂是度量如此小之人?话说医生会不会有备用马修啊。
Posted on 18 August 2020, 10:18 by:   cxr18169758511    PM
Score +5
人类最古老的ntr
Posted on 18 August 2020, 10:24 by:   aristsuki    PM
Score +7
呜呜呜虽然画风涩死了但是ntr实在看不来
Posted on 18 August 2020, 10:53 by:   hinet5527    PM
Score +7
然後過勞死下冥界各種續篇玩梗
Posted on 18 August 2020, 17:27 by:   Neghn    PM
Score +13
我觉得整个咕哒夫作为赌注被贤王调教到雌堕会更🐍爆
Posted on 18 August 2020, 18:59 by:   RLD49    PM
Score +9
虽然不喜欢ntr,但是换个其他角色都还好点,对闪闪太反感。还不如变成路人或者那些兽,所以此刻就变成无情的猎🐴人。
Posted on 19 August 2020, 05:00 by:   lanyc    PM
Score +10
有没有这种踩脚袜或者民族风衣服的tag,suki
Posted on 19 August 2020, 18:00 by:   dislikeyourself    PM
Score +12
这是弓闪会做的事吧(笑)贤王来ntr感觉好出戏啊,用不动
Posted on 20 August 2020, 17:25 by:   nasu    PM
Score +47
Posted on 20 August 2020, 22:34 by:   C.V    PM
Score +2
C闪干这事太出戏了吧。
弓闪到还有点可能....
Posted on 21 August 2020, 00:56 by:   zxdwdws    PM
Score +10
哼,这乌鲁克不救也罢!(歪嘴)
Posted on 21 August 2020, 14:30 by:   BRSsakuya    PM
Score +8
虽然画风可以,但是剧情属实8太行
光是这个剧本就没啥可以让人接受的逻辑,出现这种事都可以算异闻带了,回头提妈怎么打,这又不是原创
看这种同人你又想用原著角色,又代入不了原剧情的话,体验感就大大下降,说实话要不是画风拉分这本就很难说好
闪闪做这种事我是不太吃惊的,这人的性格是真的有可能,但是在这种情况下还要做这种事就很出戏,你画一页魔神柱当黑手也行啊,毕竟盖提亚专业背锅
结果啥都没,属实违和,味太冲了
Posted on 21 August 2020, 15:20 by:   mcmayj    PM
Score +7
YD,永远滴神!
Posted on 21 August 2020, 15:54 by:   天之志雷马    PM
Score +7
闪闪老当益壮
Posted on 21 August 2020, 19:00 by:   灰色年糕    PM
Score +8
草,因为过于出戏我全程都在笑
还好,这次我这个纯爱战神都并没有觉得多有感
也许是心里并没有觉得这算是ntr本吧,虽然他确确实实就是ntr
Posted on 22 August 2020, 07:19 by:   mousejun    PM
Score +13
这剧情真是让人如同太监上青楼,有劲儿使不出啊,仿佛梦回FSN一般的吉尔伽美什

而且玛修闪闪怎么想怎么怪,感觉牛若丸那两页还更色一点
Posted on 23 August 2020, 07:44 by:   heziwww    PM
Score -27
hxd,不能压缩一下吗?200m怎么下嘛?
Posted on 24 August 2020, 03:55 by:   d8047905b    PM
Score -15
可能是現在畫技最高的畫師,井上雄彥、尾田、久保帶人都碾壓了,松竜、たかやKi那些也潰不成軍
Posted on 26 August 2020, 17:16 by:   sdjiafdsamkf    PM
Score +18
着人理真的有拯救的必要🐴wtm直接人理烧却
Posted on 28 August 2020, 13:43 by:   chenaij    PM
Score -57
画工赞,但人设崩坏,C闪本子可选角色排队的话,小恩>西杜丽>弓凛>枪凛,怎么都轮不到玛修
Posted on 04 September 2020, 13:10 by:   straight man    PM
Score -23
总有一些傻逼纯爱党喜欢在ntr本子里讨论剧情合理性
Posted on 12 September 2020, 18:36 by:   背后黑盗    PM
Score +0
乱用令咒的屑咕哒子
Posted on 13 September 2020, 06:31 by:   Destiny0411    PM
Score +20
用令咒那兩頁,看幾次笑幾次,這才是我要的NTR
Posted on 22 September 2020, 18:10 by:   yiranbb    PM
Score +0
逊得要死,令咒都不会用
Posted on 26 October 2020, 16:44 by:   XBOXKID    PM
Score +14
OOC了没办法用
Posted on 29 June 2021, 19:37 by:   ultra seven.    PM
Score +14
你进了阴间老子可不救你
Posted on 17 August 2021, 19:42 by:   rts147    PM
Score +12
离谱但不完全离谱,如果是初版a闪的话好像也相当符合人设
Posted on 18 August 2021, 07:47 by:   粉毛酱    PM
Score +6
大快人心
Posted on 19 September 2022, 06:59 by:   kiwino    PM
Score +13

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