Hey I do commission work on deviant art if anyone's interested in some pages of how you'd like some of this to go,(This is for personal use cause I'll be posting regular pages as usual... for now on here and deviant art and uncensored on pixiv.) D-Fry is the name but it doesn't come up easily on google...YET. Please help me change that. it's 50 bucks per page but I know there's a lot of people who like to see some stuff happen. Restriction included on deviant art but if your super interested I can do some other stuff but the money's gotta be right. If your having problems finding me on google let me know I check my messages on here as well.

I kind of don't like the typesetting. But I'm willing to overlook that. Let's see where this is going.Maybe we get murderfag before this is over! :D

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I'm gonna say it, god I wish I was abbey.

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Excited to see it continue

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so she was cheating with something to dull her senses

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good story, good layouts and scene composition
but your anatomy and line consistency is iffy and those faces need work

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I appreciate the constructive feedback, not many are willing to say what they do and do not like without giving a wider opinion but I agree with everything you said. My next work is gonna be a bit different and I can't say it'll adress anything but I'm very much gonna change the line and faces. I'm still studying anatomy but its a complex topic so itll take a bit of time but believe the next work will very much improve on my line work and faces, anatomy is more of a over time sort of thing in my experience

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