Following RedLantern's release of the Lewd Elf x Orc doujin, I looked into the other works bigbro000 translated and literally all of their works have rewrites or mistranslations. And it also happens that a lot of the stuff that they worked on have good artists. So I chose my favorite and made this. Not going to do the same side-by-side thing because I feel the point was already made with the Lewd Elf X Orc doujin.

This release should be more true to the original raw and read more smoothly. I did not put as much care and effort into the typesetting because I didn't want to spend too much time on this side project.

RAW: https://e-hentai.org/s/6245d27c84/1502926-100
Twitter: https://twitter.com/hiroya1610
Pixiv: https://www.pixiv.net/en/users/238117
DL-Site: https://www.dlsite.com/books/work/=/product_id/BJ219662.html

v2: was made aware of misspellings and other small mistakes

It's so rare to see a poor translation get a second chance, thank you for your service.

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Now that's how you get a waifu and be a stay at home husbando.

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@I_Leopard thank you sooooo much dude! I was so disappointed to see such a hot piece by Hiroya receive such a mediocre translation the first time. You are the man for saving this and giving it the translation it deserves.

Edit: why the downvotes wtf

Last edited on 18 August 2020, 06:18.

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>Hella
Why did he decide to speak like an American teenage girl? Boner "like, totes" killed.

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>Hella
Cuz he's a college kid and he's using slang. What would you rather he say?

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Basically the guy was her safety net, seeing how methodically she went about it, especially considering she was searching for and failing to find a boyfriend.

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You're the MVP, I_Leopard~!
Thank you!

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Droppin' all dat ass in my lap I'd be like< OOOOOOKKKKKKAAAAAYYYYY!!!!!

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>What would you rather he say?
Any number of equivalent words that don't make him sound like a 14 year old girl?

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@Forgunia Maybe. Depending on the age difference, she probably just didn't have the confidence to ask him out especially if he wasn't showing interest. Her other relationships probably didn't work because she was dating them as replacements.

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To me it doesn't really matter if Yuuma's just Yui's "last resort/safety net" just because Yui hasn't found a man that'd accept her for being a drunken, messy slob of a woman with a killer thicc mature body.

What's important is that Yui's got a good housekeeper boyfriend, and Yuuma gets to fulfill his childhood promise of dating and potentially marrying Yui by the story's end.
Guess it was still more than just "kid talk", huh Yuuma?

Last edited on 25 January 2022, 11:34.

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