Greetings! I would like to thank you for reading my very first translation of a R-18 manga. I’m currently getting used to editing with photoshop so some of the images may seem a bit off.
I’ll also be doing commissions in the future, so if you are interested you can visit my website for more information.

In addition I’m going to translate more manga in my free time, so if you want to support me, feel free to check my patreon.
Cheers!

Website: jsrtl.wordpress.com
Patreon: patreon.com/jsrtl

Raw can be found here: https://e-hentai.org/g/1392747/ad7b636c9f/

It's a good choice for a first translation, nice and short with very little dialogue. Looks good, reads well. Great job! Thanks for sharing this.

Base +43, sleazeball -2, firedragon89 +14

female:futanari and female:"females only" are mutually exclusive. Please, never tag both of those in one gallery.

Base +9, firedragon89 +14, GGS -10, Nausea -7

Nice work, thanks. However, try using the original resolution size images. You used the resized version.

Base +13, firedragon89 +14

For the future: PLEASE use the original sized images for editing and not e-hentai's downscaled 1280px horizontal res images. They are for viewing and not for editing.

You can download the original resolution images via one of the following methods:
1. Torrent Download (if available; WARNING torrents not always contain the latest or the full res version of a gallery. Downscaled torrents normally have 1280x in their names)
2. Archive Download (click on "Archive Download" and "Download Original Archive"; e-hentai account and some GP or Credits required)
3. The "Download Original" link at the bottom of each individual image (if there is noch such link the image on your screen and the original are identical) [e-hentai account and GP or Credits required now]

Additional Q&A:
Q: Does that mean I have to upload different sized versions of my images?
A: No. You just have to upload your original sized images. All other resolutions that e-hentai displays depending on the users settings will be created by e-hentai.

And if you're learning to work with Photoshop, you should learn how to level images. You can find a guide in here: https://www.insidescanlation.com/etc/the-idiots-guide-to-editing-manga/guide/main
With that you can turn images like this https://e-hentai.org/s/ac2fe5f40f/1317895-2 into something like that https://e-hentai.org/s/2979a828ee/1364239-2

Base +16, Xalren525 +6, firedragon89 +14, HunterBlackLuna +6, Darker7 +6

Thank you all for the advice, really appreciate it! I'll try to keep everything in mind for my next translations!

Base +6, firedragon89 +14

What others have said... also use a spellchecker for porns sake!

Base +7

The Female-only/Yuri and futanari and also the yaoi/male only and cuntboy exclusivity rules are very dumb

Base +6, HunterBlackLuna +6, themultiman2 +6, Nausea +7