Please tell me of any errors in the comments.

Update 18-08: Added chapters 2 and 3 and fixed an error on page 13.
Update 24-08: Added chapters 4 and 5.

Raws used: https://e-hentai.org/g/1501121/483dcef6e0/

I was originally going to translate this a few months ago, but I saw somebody else had started doing it so I decided not to. From reading the comments I understood the translation quality isn't very good/not accurate and it has been 3 weeks since the last update so I've started my own translation. The other chapters will be added to this gallery when I finish them, but there are quite a few so I'm not sure how long it will take. I did not read the already existing translation except for the first 3-4 pages so any similarities are coincidental.

Any mistakes will be fixed when I upload the next chapter. I'm not good at typesetting so apologies for the white space.

Yeah from the comments I read this Squiggles guy was pretty shit. So thanks for taking over.

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I just appreciated someone translating them the only problem was he stopped translating them it appears. So I am glad you picking it up and that you gave Squiggles the chance to complete it first. Thanks

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@Antanernl
Thank you for the translation and editing. If you are looking for editing help before release, please check out the subforum Cove of Scanlators (EHCOVE) at the e-hentai forums. There are people there who volunteer help on projects. And if you are looking for future translation projects, you can find some manga or doujins looking for translators.

EHCOVE: https://forums.e-hentai.org/index.php?showforum=81

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Not bad. I think you could use a decent editor. EHCOVE is a good choice

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This is known as heaven.

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No offense, but this translation is even less accurate than Squiggles'. I noticed at least half a dozen mistranslations that completely misread the meaning of the original statements. Many of them you don't even need to check the raw to notice; they obviously don't make sense in the context of the scenes they appear in. ("I'm just making sure I can take my clothes off?" is probably the biggest offender; it doesn't even make sense out of context.) That being said, it flows much better than Squiggles', doesn't contain any of their odd transliteration choices, and has better typesetting, so it's not a total loss.

Edit: If you'd like, I could list the issues I found when I have some time.

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What's up with the girl on 197?

Sequel?

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Poor man's DISTANCE

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"I'm just making sure I can take my clothes off?" Literature Gold! o/

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Is the translator currently working on corrections to the dialogue? I don't want to sound like a selfish jerk, but right now I'm waiting for all of the kinks to be worked out before I continue reading the rest of the chapters. I stopped reading at chapter 5.

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@savage511 I'm not working on fixing the dialogue because nobody has bothered to message me telling me what they consider to be incorrect or mistranslated.

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@Antareni
Ah, okay. Thanks for the reply.
When I saw pieman11's comment, I thought that you two were making corrections.
Anyway, thanks for working on this translation.

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This was really good wish it was longer tho some kind of epilogue in series like this are always nice

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This is great and all, I do love how Pei draws women, but huge tits and ass aren't exactly typical track club material. It would be cool if we could get a tankoubon set in a female athletic club where the girls look like they actually compete in track and field, like toned and slim, with abs. Not enough female abs is my message.

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@Antareni Oh, since you are looking for dialogue fixes, I'll send you what I found when I have some time, probably this weekend. I just didn't want to put in the effort if you weren't interested, lol

Edit: Unfortunately, I completely forgot about this. Admittedly, by the time I originally made this comment, I had largely forgotten what the specific mistakes I had noticed were in the first place. My apologies!

Last edited on 22 February 2024, 01:29.

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The characters really don't feel like they have enough personality.

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@pyromancyblues while I see where you’re coming from, I think they’re still pretty different in art style. Besides, I think there is room for more than one DISTANCE in the market.

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feels like a cliffhanger

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Since this is completely translated, please tag it as tankoubon.
Thanks.

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