Source: https://e-hentai.org/g/1325346/2282a4c734/

When you get revenge on the ice cold one trying to kill you.

Even though there isn't much text, there's so many pages and I might have missed quite a lot of the grammatical errors. If you find a few that doesn't sound acceptable, please do report them.
Note: Read the rules for the "poor grammar" tag before just upvoting it. I know there's errors, so no need to be pissy about it...
https://ehwiki.org/wiki/poor_grammar

~User comments~
Theseous: Do you mean the translation or the plot itself?

This art is too good for this fucking terrible writing

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spooky sexy ghost
reminds me of Cynthia from Silent Hill 4 her ghost is absolute spooky (all ghost on that game are) but she still turns me on

Base +10

为什么这种艺术没有未经审查的?

Base +3, cloudfrom +1, wenx° +5

Ghosts need love too!

Base +25, Donarl +12, GabrielTDO +6

Hey i love hot sexy ghost !

Base +7, CritiicalMass +6

This art style feels as if someone went and took pictures and then drew on them or made them art like after. Also did anyone notice how fucked up her fingers were ?

Base +6, MarkJames +11, Bevvvy +6, goya_dechi +6, DahSpanker +6, primeemu16 +7, douglas14141 +6, N11ck +5

I'm pretty sure the author just drew on pics of him fucking his sex doll.

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He just turned screenshots of a home porno of the person's sex doll and him in a room into comic style the sketch effect darkened the lighting to get the spooky look next saturation for the darkened face and tone then put the captaining for a story according to what is being shown on the screenshots then by order as a comic would be 🤔😌😉😎😍

Base +6, POOT +7, StratoSquir +6, Quantumpower +6, NoWait2006 +6, ZuluMdebele +5, Bulopu -18

This is my new favorite work

Base +6, cyberfish78 +7, Bulopu -18

This looks like someone actually was fucking in real life and then decided to draw over it lol. Not bad.

Base +6, cyberfish78 +7, RainXD +6, Bulopu -18

GHOOOSSSSSSSSSSTTTTTTTTT BLOWJOB

Base +7, Hemidactylus +6

P.16: "nick"
P.24: "terrible" should be "terribly"
P.46: "male instint"

>P.13, 27, & 50 Ghost girl needs some bones in her hands.

Base +7, q91 +23

So that's why :
- The face isn't shown in the pictures.
- (imho) The skin is too 'shiny' for a ghost.
- It looks as if the ghost had done her share of breast augmentation.

Base +7, Bulopu +18

LMAO This dude is just literally fucking a sex doll and apply some filter on it

Last edited on 04 September 2020, 07:33.

Base +4, Hemidactylus +6, douglas14141 +6, Bulopu -18

没中文，可惜

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