Grammatical errors: Pg 4, bottom right: "Or *does* Kajika want to be their opponent?" Pg 8, middle left: "Only women and children *were* left" Pg 10, 4th panel first bubble: "come at me one and one" doesn't really make sense. Do you mean "one on one"? The raw seems like it's saying "Keep on coming!" Pg 11, first bubble: "I *managed* to exterminate them" Pg 14, 6th panel second bubble: The sentence doesn't need a comma. Could replace it with "..." if it needs a pause Pg 18, 2nd panel: "If he *does* me one more time" Pg 22, 1st panel first bubble: "What were we *fighting* for, anyway?" Pg 22, 3rd panel: "I don't know *anymore* "