Re-uploading again, 4 more discrepancies/typos I've fixed. I'm sorry about this.
I've invested 12 hours into translating this because I like this doujin. I've then invested additional 8 hours into fixing the initial version (I was taken back by how fast the time went by as I was doing this, once I'd realized it was 4 o'clock and not half past 1 as I'd thought.
@Gandeloft: when you do changes, even if that means replacing all the files, the ideal thing is to edit the already existing gallery instead of creating a new one. This way, people won't download an outdated version by mistake.