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No Lunch Take out!

Western
Posted:2020-09-06 21:41
Parent:1719732
Visible:Yes
Language:English  
File Size:12.38 MiB
Length:35 pages
Favorited:392 times
Rating:
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Average: 2.96

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Posted on 12 May 2020, 20:56 by:   BattleshipGascogne    PM
Score -63
God, back to this swill. Over-under on how many pages it takes for this asshole to get to anything beyond light petting this time? I'm going to go with fifty.
Posted on 13 May 2020, 02:02 by:   velour    PM
Score -52
why is there never any sex in this guy's comics?
Posted on 13 May 2020, 03:33 by:   Solzuke    PM
Score -48
Gotta milk them patreon bux until that well dries up
Posted on 13 May 2020, 06:18 by:   cancer-guppy    PM
Score +89
"this person consistently does something I don't like. why am I constantly disappointed. :((((((((("
Posted on 17 May 2020, 09:11 by:   Yanguskun    PM
Score +71
The yanderedev of fat art.
Posted on 18 May 2020, 17:58 by:   MrBloodCrescent    PM
Score +33
Uh oh, everyone's going to be mad again.
Posted on 18 May 2020, 20:18 by:   Felix A.    PM
Score +16
i like these stories. they are fun to read
Posted on 20 May 2020, 22:54 by:   BattleshipGascogne    PM
Score +61
The nothingburger continues! Stay tuned for next week's non-installment!
Posted on 25 May 2020, 13:55 by:   AnonLoliLover    PM
Score +59
Wtf, Sydney was much fatter. I wanted to see her grow a massive double belly, but I guess we're back to ground zero.
Posted on 29 May 2020, 20:31 by:   BattleshipGascogne    PM
Score +55
I LOVE how this is going. 6 pages of nothing, the main character is dieting and has inexplicably lost like 50 pounds, and all the other characters are similarly slimmer. So, we've got a pointless exhibitionary scene, no sex, shrinking fatties, and LOADS MORE OF THE SAME to look forward to! Yay!
Posted on 29 May 2020, 23:14 by:   Joklet    PM
Score +54
This shit could legit be rated E for Everyone and nobody would notice
Posted on 10 June 2020, 01:01 by:   Mrsage86    PM
Score -8
So, what exactly are you guys all whining about?
That the artist who uploads his content for free and doesn't paywall it behind patreon or some other bullshit is too slow with the PACING of his FREE NICHE FETISH ECCHI?
Are you fucking kidding me?
Posted on 13 June 2020, 20:09 by:   swagmeister1337    PM
Score +60
Just more aimless mediocrity. Boring art, boring body shapes, boring dialogue, boring characters. I prefer slow story-driven stuff but I can't stand any of this artist's work, it just has nothing going for it
Posted on 14 June 2020, 03:12 by:   Mrsage86    PM
Score -13
So just ignore it for a few months and wait for him to release the good parts
"boring" is such a vague criticism it's obvious you are more just frustrated that it isn't going fast enough.
The art itself is of fine quality, which is what the ratings should be used for
Posted on 14 June 2020, 04:23 by:   BattleshipGascogne    PM
Score +81
***"boring" is such a vague criticism it's obvious you are more just frustrated that it isn't going fast enough.***

It's been 10 solid pages now of literally nothing in a comic whose SINGLE selling point is softcore sex.

- The characters are vapid, unlikable narcissists.
- Nobody ever gets penetrated; the 'hot' scenes are extremely brief.
- They live in a universe where - without exception - every male character is either a bully or a chode (what purpose does Kip's dad serve, exactly, other than to be the oblivious stooge who cannot satisfy his wife so she has to go behind his back and fuck the kiddies?).
- The artist is a piece of shit and a known trap (who actively encourages people to think he's a woman) who censors even mildly critical commentary, then sics his pathetic, worshiping white knights onto those who dare question the narrative.

People are more than justified in calling this shit out.
Last edited on 16 June 2020, 16:31.
Posted on 14 June 2020, 16:40 by:   swagmeister1337    PM
Score +47
Lmao, how is saying something is uninteresting "vague criticism"? And why are you accusing me of being frustrated it isn't going fast enough, when I clearly stated I prefer slower stories? If I hated the slow pacing, I'd be openly complaining about it along with everyone else here. I don't care if there's "too much story", I care the story is absolutely garbage. Even if I agreed with you that the art is high quality (I don't), the notion that only the art should be judged when rating a COMIC (you know, the medium defined as having both art and a narrative) is hilariously stupid. There's no way you actually believe that, right? If you just want to jerk off to still images without caring about the narrative, why are you even on this website? Or even more perplexingly, why would you defend this pile of trash when it's 95% shit that you think don't matter and only 5% pretty pictures?
Posted on 30 June 2020, 20:18 by:   BattleshipGascogne    PM
Score +38
'The end.'

....

Wut? The entire episode was... one... scene?

Lol. Who is patronizing this assclown and WHY?
Last edited on 08 September 2020, 02:00.
Posted on 10 September 2020, 14:03 by:   GWZ-KTS    PM
Score +25
Panel 33 : "Tina, I'm gonna throw up !!"

Fine ?! Please do ?! Puke, burp, ANYTHING, but do something. Let something actually "happen", for god sake. Poke her stomach, finger her navel, push her nonsensical stomach, but DO SOMETHING !

That's how despair I am after 30 pages of this guy'scomic.

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"The end" ? ... "THE END" ? What do you mean "the end" ? Nothing happened ! And I mean... NOTHING.

See, I can understand the bbw fetish, but entwined with that deep lore Kip is trying to share, I don't know, it kinda falls flat. (Ha ! Flat ! Get it ?!)

Seriously though. I hate myself for saying this, but damn that's less than boring. That's actually sheer nothingness, sheesh.
Posted on 16 September 2020, 06:11 by:   Gunkshot    PM
Score +17
Holy shit that went nowhere. I expected them to get back to their place and something happening there but it ends in a fucking CAB? Yeesh

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