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No offense or anything, but god damn my sides are in orbit at page 4, I don't know why but I just find it funny

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I like where this is going, good stuff, looking forward to more :)

Nice work, thanks for sharing :)

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those eyes that she has are really creepy but in a good way .please keep it up.

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She's a little effeminate in the same way water is a little wet.

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"Your daughter told me I had to sleep with you, she can't sleep with a boy" ok

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This is so absurd and hilarious. I like it, keep it up.

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"curiosity haha"

haha

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damn bro. i hope you finish this one

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MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE

MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE

<3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3

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I hope the story ends with the daughter barging in on them and wishing her dad a happy Father's Day.

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You're gay if you love felsala and you're gay if you don't.

Last edited on 01 April 2020, 01:45.

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Those eyes could hypnotize Kaa. That ass could hypnotize ME!

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The only problems I saw were on the third page, but then again , it wasn’t that big of a deal.

“You said it was effeminate”

I dunno it just sounded off.

I probably would have gone with

“I know She said he was effeminate, but...”

Rephrased the opening, added ‘but’ to lead into the “what is this!?” Line That came in a panel after.

But that is just me. I did have a few other notes, but it’s just me nitpicking at this point, lol.

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hurry with my pages. so good, so far.

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"Summer, I wanna fuck your dad."

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"You like to get your ass fucked."

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"Curiosity haha"
"Your daughter said I had to sleep with you, she can't sleep with a boy"

Guy knows what he wants.

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those eyes look like they're GLOWING

glow in the dark contacts?

that booty is FINE, though i'm a bit surprised he dove straight in to start things off, rather than kissing those DSLs

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Dang no more pages :(

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