Are you sure this is English?

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This is inggris. If you dont like it. Dont read. You can add more tag if you want jst whatever. I just translate what i see and what i undrestand. Dont complain brother. If you want to delete this, UP TO YU.

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Waiting for proper translation to be made. Are you sure you translate this? not machine translated?

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Think I'll wait for a proper trans from Hennojin

Also what software did you use to place the text? It looks like it was done in something like Microsoft Word with the way the white coloured text boxes are obscuring parts of the speech bubble... should at least learn how to use an image editor like GIMP. Though admittedly GIMP is a bit of a clusterfuck on Windows.

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I though i'm the only one not understanding a thing

I know your trying to translate the Japs,

at least ask others to proofread your work =_=

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"i have the better one in my album,with proper english and editing + colloring. but i will give you the worst one." <-- That has to be the wost pitch I've seen in my entire life. No one will be interested in paying you if you don't prove yourself first. If you were selling cars, you'd basically dump a broken vehicle at the car dealership and say to your customer "You can get this one for free. The good car you're actually looking for is in my garage, you can't see it though - you're gonna have to buy it first."

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Shitty translation and editing... half star for you since I can't put zero.

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Wow... the poor grammar tag was removed....

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You are on the wrong path! Go here: https://e-hentai.org/g/1751136/e1fa119bdb/

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ten random errors to qualify for the "poor grammar" tag (leaving apart the horrible cleaning and typesetting done in Word)
p2 "you're going to meet you first" doesn't make sense
"did you really come to see you" same
p3 "if you use the thing that I made it to Nagisa"
p4 "tormined" isn't a word
"odading?" same
p6 "king Ma" Should be "demon king" (Maou, 魔王)
p11 "send a boring time"
p12 "milk ring" -> "nipple ring"
p15 "bless from" "a blessing from"
"it keep" "it keeps"

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