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These are both chapters of Futago Yuugi from the tankoubon Waiyoku, released together.

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When you stick it in crazy by proxy

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Off the charts bat s**t crazy sister.
Run for the hills.

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my day is ruined

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Page 36:

"I'm going to test Akito-san. If he really cares about you, there's no way he'd cum inside another woman's pussy."

That's like telling a starving man, "If you really like my cooking, there's no way you'd eat this food that my sister prepared for you."

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this story has potential until she introduced the other dudes.

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Okay, so the starting premise is good, but it kinda goes downhill once he confesses he knew the entire time, not because it leads to the depressing ending, but because that's where the author decided the story needs to be right here, right now. First it's a measured development, then it's, "okay, we need to get to the rape, NTR, domination stuff, so now he knows and now they're happy and blah blah blah sad ending sex," all at fucking once. Literally one extra chapter could fix this thing 1,000% (at least in terms of pacing).

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Read this without checking the tags, then around page 32 I was like, "Awww, that was kinda wholesome for a hentai doujin... Wait, why are there 25 pages left?" Then page 33 had me like "Ah shit, here we go again."

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That took a slight turn in the middle.

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This story ended on page 31 and nobody can tell me otherwise.

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They had us in the first half, not gonna lie: The Manga

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Directed by Rian Johnson

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what a waste of excellent art. did the artist have a stroke between chapters? it's edgy for the sake of being edgy, with no rhyme or reason.

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It's so disjointed. No buildup to the twist, just boom! The author does this a lot I've noticed.

1st chapter great. 2nd chapter is meh.

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If Neil Druckmann was the editor for an ero manga.

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What a twest

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Like @bibliomaniac , For me, the story ends in page 31.

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That went from 0 to a 100 real fucking quick lmao

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Alrighty then, that's neat

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Too edgy and too sudden.

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Terrible writing wtf...

Even if the older sister felt justified in the guy she likes being stolen by her sister impersonating her, just terrible pacing and writing.

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I liked the wholesome part of it, but not the edgy part where the older twin turns into a crazy siscon.

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Well that took a 180...

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I thought that the reason why this H had the tag "Rape" is because the younger sister was committing " rape by fraud" by posing as her sister.

I was surprised by the final twist.

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I got bamboozeld! Cant say i like when it seems that a story is written by two separate authors but art is great and translation is clean so thats nice.

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Boy I did not see that coming.

Base +6, Visadio +18

Shiokonbu'd.

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Then there were two men fucked up her sister
This is the war that the older sister to protect her sister form "worthless man "——give her sister to the other more dirty,sicker,more worthless men
What a joke!

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oot. awww... oof. aww..... YIKES

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I really liked this, but something weird is happening. Page 33 only loads partially, and then there's 24 blank pages. I guess it was an upload failure.

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@brandivolgio
Nice comparison.

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I liked both part, sure it was abrupt and went to 100 pretty fast but I still liked it. I guess if you want a "punch" you can't really give too flagrants hints. I'd like to see a sequel, but I guess the author is probably done with it; I'm guessing he wanted a quick plot twist over a longer twisted story.

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Well, that took a turn

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Story was great until page 32. If was somewhat fine until page 41, after that its fucked up.

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Lacking pregnancy

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I enjoy NTR so I was pleasantly surprised.

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@Chroe
so I'm not the only one who's had that problem. Well, it's a wonderful point to end the story, amirite?

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Soft NTR, followed by wholesome, then ending with much more hardcore NTR with a twist of who’s the perpetrator. Pretty great stuff for an NTR doujin, imo.

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Wow, what a way to ruin a story.
Fuck this noise, anything after 31 don`t exist.

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Poor Rin should go full Monte Cristo on her shitty older sister.

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I don't hate femdom or non-reverse NTR (actually, I'm fairly fond of them) but the second chapter didn't even have an ending. Or a point. It was just random kidnap and rape. And they were frankly a cute couple, so it's a bit of a shame.

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I'm sorry, but nani the fuck.

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It's interesting that people are reading the first chapter as wholesome, when it's 100% the dude being raped? The guy doesn't have consensual sex in the whole book, it's just that he claims to be okay with the first half.

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@SSincere
Sir, rape and seduce are different.

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Damn!
There should have a continuation of this, like a whole tanko and shit.
At least to take away the bitter taste of this ending.

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That moment when the bitch younger sister finds out her older sister is a psycho....

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Holy shit this story took a 180.

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