Needs leveling and you should probably take another look at the anti-aliasing.

Base +19

And it's also not using the full res RAWs.

You can download the original resolution images via one of the following methods:
1. Torrent Download (if available; WARNING torrents not always contain the latest or the full res version of a gallery. Downscaled torrents normally have 1280x in their names)
2. Archive Download (click on "Archive Download" and "Download Original Archive"; e-hentai account and some GP or Credits required)
3. The "Download Original" link at the bottom of each individual image (if there is noch such link the image on your screen and the original are identical) [e-hentai account and GP or Credits required now]

Additional Q&A:
Q: Does that mean I have to upload different sized versions of my images?
A: No. You just have to upload your original sized images. All other resolutions that e-hentai displays depending on the users settings will be created by e-hentai.

RAW: https://e-hentai.org/g/804001/f1ef7cdc41/

Base +17, IllHaveaNickname +11

Page 12: tsukkomi oitsukanai
"I can't tsukkomi fast enough"

Tsukkomi being a comedic retort to a foolish act (called a boke). Since this is awkward to translate directly, it might be best to go with something along the lines of "I can't keep up with all this absurdity."

Base +8, VeryStiff +6