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[Pandacorya]The Girl With a Mirrored Heart | Sousaku Yuri: Shinzou ga Gyaku ni Aru Onnanoko no Hanashi [English]

[ぱんだこりゃ] 創作百合:心臓が逆にある女の子の話 [英訳]

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Posted:2020-10-28 06:15
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Language:English  TR
File Size:7.38 MiB
Length:4 pages
Favorited:471 times
Rating:
217
Average: 4.47

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Posted on 28 October 2020, 06:15 by:   afkeroge    PM
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Translated and typeset by afkeroge.
Raw: https://www.pixiv.net/en/artworks/85260429
Posted on 28 October 2020, 06:20 by:   Noni    PM
Score +131
Raw can be found here: https://e-hentai.org/g/1764186/6784f3b67d/

Short, but sweet. Thanks for sharing this!
Posted on 28 October 2020, 08:22 by:   Boomer30569    PM
Score +310
How do you get bullied for having your internal organs in a slightly different place than normal? How would they even know?
Posted on 28 October 2020, 09:09 by:   sirskyrider    PM
Score +322
>How do you get bullied for having your internal organs in a slightly different place than normal?

The point of bullying is bullying. As someone who has experienced it quite a fair bit over a long period of time, I can tell that bullies - and I do mean ACTUAL bullies, not people who tell you to stop being creepy or w/e - don't give an iota of a fuck what the reason for their actions is, it can be clothes, it can be your voice, it can be a skin condition, whatever there is to be latched on to - the purpose is always to put someone down or drive them to shut themselves out of a given social circle.

>How would they even know?

In Japan, schools perform regular health checks during which the heart rate is also measured. Since these tend to be somewhat semi-public, her bullies can easily have seen the doctor put the stethoscope on the right side of her chest instead of the left.

Anyway... good stuff and the resolution is very cute. :)
Posted on 01 November 2020, 18:11 by:   baxtus    PM
Score +29
A little too short, needed more buildup, how did they start dating and what led to their first time, etc.

Otherwise a cute story
Posted on 05 November 2020, 06:02 by:   MistressMouse    PM
Score +37
what kind of monster would rate this anything less than 5/5?
Posted on 09 November 2020, 04:16 by:   MissingTextures    PM
Score +25
God I wish that were me.
Posted on 29 December 2020, 14:57 by:   Sle1nde1rma1n    PM
Score +21
Feels kind of far fetched since people don't really care about how your internal organs look like, but I really like it.

So fluffy!
Posted on 10 January 2021, 16:19 by:   imaliar    PM
Score +22
That line about feeling each other's heartbeat got me right in the feels.
Posted on 25 April 2022, 17:28 by:   pihip    PM
Score +26
@Sle1nde1rma1n

If bullies want to grief you, any reason will work for them, no matter how trivial and stupid. And since bullies are also ignorant as fuck (it comes in the job description), they would have no clue about a rare medical condition and see someone with it as a weird freak to harass.

This story is lovely, short but right to the point and with enough power to reach anyone's heart. The last page is especially moving. <3

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