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[COOL BRAIN (Kitani Sai)] ANGEL PAIN Extra 7 -Ryoujoku Scatology- [English] [Digital]

[COOL BRAIN (木谷さい)] ジョクスカ [英訳] [DL版]

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Posted:2020-10-28 08:46
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Language:English  TR
File Size:47.09 MiB
Length:42 pages
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Posted on 28 October 2020, 08:46 by:   lastresort2020    PM
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//WARNING//
This is scat, so don't read this if you're not into that.

Raw: https://e-hentai.org/g/453158/9e9ee77413/ (but with an x)
dlsite: https://www.dlsite.com/maniax/work/=/product_id/RJ088878.html
Pixiv: https://www.pixiv.net/en/users/9040

We now also have a PayPal and a patreon so we can buy better quality or obscure material in the future.
https://www.paypal.me/Lastresorttran
https://www.patreon.com/lastresorttranslations

I have noticed that some people use my English translations for their own Languages, That's absolutely fine by me.
If you want a cleaned version just send me a message, this should save you a lot of work.

I'm also looking for some new proofreaders, so send me a message if you're interested.
Posted on 01 November 2020, 19:00 by:   laimer    PM
Score +14
First of all, thank you very much lastresort2020 for all this great content you provide and share with everyone. Really a breath of fresh air in this landscape which has dried up of contents in recent years.

Then, a discussion for who is interested to see similar materials, unusual and far from vanilla.

In this one, the art is great, in fact Kitani Sai is one of my top favorite authors, even the non scat works. However, the story here is weak. There is barely a narrative component, the focus on fetish contents is high, but in most pages there are random characters that the reader doesn't even know why are in that situation, or why are doing what they're doing. Furthermore, most of the scenes are repetitive: it seems to watch always the same scene in different pages.

As a comparison, see Shinozaki Rei "Over Dose" (also waiting a translation for many years): https://e-hentai.org/g/116139/3c9601ce73/

So, ok here clearly the scat is not the focus, but the narrative dimension has an amazing progression, leaving the reader to guess where the situation is going to escalate further at every chapter. What's more, the scat is CONTEXTUAL with the progression into anal play. It takes you to see how the girl arrived to scat and her embarassment and excitement makes more sense and is more involving.

Another amazing one from the same author is "Behind", this one more scat focused: https://e-hentai.org/g/1494/74e0612e86/

Any feedback and suggestion is interesting.

Thank you for your attention :)
Last edited on 02 November 2020, 09:11.

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