A good doujin deserve it a good typesetting and proper redrawing.

The only thing I did was use the Textless version in 3200px, use the English version using different types of fonts and I added text to some bubbles that were untranslated, so here you go.

If there is an error, I would appreciate it if you could tell me which page to fix it.

Enjoy it and have a good day.

Textless version: https://e-hentai.org/g/1747855/b02dd2d9ad/
English version in 1280px: https://e-hentai.org/g/1759655/c9a522e965/

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The whole previous translation needs to be completely redone, because it sounds hokey as fuck. You can coat a piece of shit in paint, but it'll still be a piece of shit, just like that "translation" you used.

Also, your files super fucking bloated, as they're over 200 MB in size. 18 pages shouldn't be 200 MB in size whatsoever because the RAW is only 45 MB. You should export your files as jpegs with 70 to 80 quality to significantly cut down on bloat on color images. Let me link you to EHCOVE's scanlation resource that'll show you how to do just that: https://forums.e-hentai.org/index.php?showtopic=68725.

As to Gansta, the user who "cleaned" the files that you used: you did a piss-poor fucking job on it. You just simply whited out text in the transparent bubbles and didn't even fucking bother to redraw the missing textures behind it. In some bubbles, you completely whited out the bubble and covered up the artwork behind it, while in others, I CAN STILL SEE THE FUCKING RAW TEXT INSIDE!
That's fucking lazy, and the fact that you call that half-assed cleaning job "textless" makes me fucking sick to my stomach, all for a bunch of GP and upvotes. That's fucking pathetic.

I appreciate your hard work and varied font usage, Shevanel, but you can't build a house on a shaky foundation, the foundation being that "cleaned" raw you used, which I mentioned previously has significant issues and is, in fact, not fully cleaned. Ideally I wouldn't rely upon pre-cleaned scans, because they're often rife with issues when it comes to transparent bubbles, especially colored transparent bubbles. But then again, good scanlations are hard work, something most uploads on this site aren't. Which is a shame, really...

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