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[Kiiro no Nantoka] Alice to Otou-sama | Alice and Father (Sword Art Online) [English]

[きいろのなんとか] アリスとお父様 (ソードアート・オンライン) [英訳]

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Posted:2020-11-11 09:46
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Language:English  TR
File Size:5.01 MiB
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Posted on 11 November 2020, 09:46 by:   Kenichiq    PM
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Posted on 11 November 2020, 10:14 by:   pork:zero    PM
Score +62
Posted on 11 November 2020, 10:59 by:   Ryuufap    PM
Score +229
this translation is completely terrible lmfao, not only is the english offputting, you didn't even manage to translate every text bubble
Posted on 11 November 2020, 12:18 by:   Hentai Observer    PM
Score -100
thanks! at least his trying to translate it much appreciate it
Posted on 11 November 2020, 15:41 by:   DarkTemplarXIII    PM
Score +199
"My dream is to have a baby in Kirito someday." Lmfao!

I guess Alice is a futa and Kirito is getting genderbent again.
Posted on 12 November 2020, 04:16 by:   yetsun    PM
Score +63
great translation, here, a tiny little participation medal for your efforts. It's size is proportional to the amount of effort you put into this work. sorry it's only bronze because I've run out of golds and silvers.

🥉

Seriously people, if english is not your first language please do not attempt a translation. The result is just a terrible unreadable mess that hardly makes sense. Translate it into your native language instead.

and if you have to use machine translation then be upfront and label it as such.
Posted on 13 November 2020, 08:07 by:   dap00    PM
Score +21
"Unusual for Kirito's father to be at home"
More like it's unusual to see any proof of his existence at all.
Posted on 13 November 2020, 11:00 by:   Yukipo~    PM
Score +8
Sorry but this ain't good TL chief I recommend you translate it into your native language instead
Posted on 15 November 2020, 07:41 by:   Comrade Claus    PM
Score +10
i was Expecting Best Dad, Bercouli to be here

I came away VERY disappointed
Posted on 17 November 2020, 10:41 by:   lostapostle777    PM
Score +8
Damn, you just need an editor, to help with the language barrier.
Posted on 02 July 2022, 13:00 by:   Scumbini    PM
Score +42
Rough grammar
p1 go to sink -> let it melt away (?)
p2 cum on -> cum
to cum inside -> for cumming inside
to make -> (remove entirely)
taken up -> removed from (?)
p4 body still -> body is still
baby in Kirito -> baby with Kirito
way to go -> way away
dad still -> dad is still
from now on -> now

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