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Excellent Work,, Thanks for the upload

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Native english? not translated from other language?

p.24 It should be "I only remember that semen wouldn't came out even if they kept squeezing it out..." instead of "I only remember that semen came out even if they kept squeezing it out..."
cause "I only remember that semen came out even if they kept squeezing it out..." = he could still create semen whenever they squeezing him, which is nothing to talk about.

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ㄴtranslated by Korean

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rip ro and commander

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我竟然在本子里看到了pzb39，太震撼了

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这里也要迫害ro嘛，太残暴了（笑）

Excellent work, I got your loving towards m4. Me too.

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needs yandere tag

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Nice art, and thanks for the translation.

But, people "go" in Japanese but in English they "come" .

So, mistranslation on p12, p13, etc.

Curiously, it's correct on p20.

Also p13 "I wasnt be like this" ought to be "I wasn't like this"; "Are you have a fetish" should be "Do you have a fetish", p20 "Chew" isn't a kssing sound but what you do on a piece of food.

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话说m4的衣服好像是连体吧？

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Ended abit too fast

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From what I understand, Mackgee used to have a professional translator working for him until said translator quit. So now his english works are machine translated instead.

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