There was so much SFX in this one that I decided to just leave it all untouched. My poor typesetting and total lack of redrawing skills really stands out on books like these, but I hope that you can get a little bit of enjoyment from it.

Raw: https://e-hentai.org/g/1486968/e4822c50e5/

PERFECT

Thankyou very much

this was really needed

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love doujins that focus on blowjobs. it's really hot.

thanks for the translation!

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@Wertlos

I notice that your filesize is extremely bloated at 116 MB. The RAW you linked to is only 42.53 MB. A general rule of thumb for scanlations is that they should not be significantly larger than the RAW.
Your black and white files also most likely in RGB color rather than Greyscale. A simple mistake, but one that's easily fixed. Using an example from another gallery, I'll show below how to convert your files to greyscale from RGB color, and then convert them into 32-color B/W PNGs to cut down on bloat, assuming you use Photoshop to edit:

1.) This file's in RGB color by default, circled in green: https://puu.sh/GQDIS/d06e7b5d38.png
2.) Showing you how to change from RGB color to greyscale: https://puu.sh/GQDNH/2f7cec4ad9.png
3.) Discard color data to change: https://puu.sh/GQDOf/353dee9762.png
4.) Now the file's in greyscale, circled in green: https://puu.sh/GQDQw/e918d2f029.png
5.) Using the export to web option: https://puu.sh/GQDSu/8bc322505f.png
6.) Export settings for 32-color B/W PNGs: https://puu.sh/GQDXR/4e507aad3a.png

With that, you should be able to cut down your filesize tremendously. Your adjusted filesize doesn't have to be the same as the RAW, but rather, not significantly greater than it, especially because PNGs are larger than jpegs. Your typesetting really isn't all that bad, and if you're not that skilled in redrawing, you've done the smart thing and simply left it alone, as trying to redraw without proper knowledge will do more harm than good. As an editor for the Little White Butterflies scanlation group, I've seen my fair share of crappy typesetting and poor redrawing on e-hentai, none of which of I see in your work.

A minor gripe I see is that while you leveled your scans, I suspect that you also leveled your fonts inadvertently. Another common mistake, but again, easily fixed. Simply move your leveling layer below the text layers, and that's it. It's either that, or you possibly forgot to turn off "Faux Bold" in your typesetting options. I don't use Wurmics Bravo (your main dialogue font) much, so I'm not 100% sure that either of those are the case, but if they are, you can easily correct that issue. Other than that, good work. It's refreshing not to have to tear into a scanlator for once.

EDIT: No problem, man. Happy to help good scanlations like yours.

Last edited on 29 November 2020, 02:55.

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Can we have a tag for focus blowjobs? Similar to focus anal.

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@THDragon

Thanks for all of the advice. I was concerned about the huge file sizes too, especially when the usual exporting as 8-bit grayscale in GIMP wasn't cutting it down any.
I was getting pop ups about the images having an embedded color profile when importing them, but it really flew over my head. I'll make sure to figure it out before it comes up again.

I got into the bad habit of bolding the fonts back when I had limited font options and was worried about the main font ending up looking too thin. I'll be sure to stop doing this from now on.
It's also possible that I did inadvertently level the fonts when trying to level the main image too, since this was the first time I decided to level the images at the last moment after finishing everything else.
It's embarrassing that I have such a bad eye for noticing these things and let them happen.

Thanks again for all of the advice, I'll try to not make the same mistakes again.

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Personally I have no problem with the typesetting, the translation is really good, and Mitsugi's works are a pain to redraw, which is why it's hard to see them translated in the first place despite their quality. So tyvm for this. I'm only a bit worried about Yuel's accent but I would have no idea how to render it anyway.

Also I thought this would be my favorite Mitsugi book, unfortunately some of Yuel's faces kinda creep me out tbh. I mean just look at Gran's reaction on p.20, you'd think it was on purpose. Also not enough ball play. Glorious work still but surprisingly less mindblowing than his first 2 Yuel books are, imo.

Last edited on 29 November 2020, 01:58.

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Oh dear god, she literally sucked the soul out of him.

Just more proof why yuel is best girl

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