Inkeranon here, I've been doing this long set of commissions for my client involving their OCs and sometimes mine. As you can probably see, the basic format is: Reina checks out the job board at the local Adventurer's Guild, picks a fairly normal-looking quest, and then hilariously sexy shenanigans ensue. It's also ongoing because there's always more situations to stumble into, so if y'alls have any suggestions then don't be shy to give them!

https://twitter.com/InkerAnon (artist)
https://twitter.com/Dazorelle (commissioner)

Holy shit, this is amazing. I like the combination of small stories matching up with the overarching stories. Especially, that it is progressing with the same main characters instead of introducing different stories that have nothing to do with each other.

Now a bit of feedback, as you asked:
I guess for the size of this story it is fine, but I'd recommend to have more than one story per escalation "level" of corruption. For instance, some public bath story, skimpy clothing (instead of from wearing some armor to naked...), toys while walking around e.g., butt plug, get back to the tavern job after being so crazy (not only write it, but visualize it). Maybe what if she/they were in a new area, with people not knowing her. Then there could be a train story - groping and molesting, naked/sexual festival, lake/sea - beach (with micro bikini or sth. creative).

In general, I think your story is superb in that it gets the job done. :P But the story could need more subtle transitioning without losing the hardcore latter part (working on the beginning for so long, that you lose focus of the hardcore part), which would mean to double or even triple the size of this story.

As about the part that comes after what you already have written: change of atmosphere and overall type of perspective into more care free type of couple who love sharing and have fun stories together. This could involve a lot of different ideas too. If you're interested, I'll write them in another comment. Btw, I like the style of drawing. The text is ok - try to paraphrase often with a few details.

So far, AWESOME, continue!

Cheers,
Caschque.

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Nice, I love stories of lesbians cheating with men.

Base +6, Lilisionnach -3

this is some real good shit

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Commissioner here, Go ahead and comment any ideas you have caschque! We're always looking for more ideas to try out.

Also thanks for the feedback!

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This might not be in line with the featured fetishes, but any chance for them to:
-take on an adventure expecting Debauchery & Degeneracy but turned out to be a completely normal quest, so they snapped in frustration and start milking everything in sight
-similar to the previous, corrupting their client instead during an escort mission

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I assume those ideas are for Sierra and her lover? I can take note of those, they sound pretty fun.

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Good fun just as the artist described.

Art 6. Plot 7. Sexiness 6. English 6. All out of 10.

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I'm a big fan of stories that are just, like, shenanigans. No need to think too hard about it, just people getting into strange, sexy situations.

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I never would have thought searching for bauldr's gate porn brings me such high quality stuff.

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