[Kunaboto] Date Makiko (Digimon Story Cyber Sleuth) [English]

Posted on 20 December 2020, 21:06 by: greengrasstree

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All pages translated in English, as well as all variations and process pictures (textless, shading, line work, sketches, etc).

Posted on 28 January 2021, 12:19 by: matthaus

thanks for the translation !
is the lucky guy making her pregnant?
it looks like on page 10

Posted on 28 January 2021, 13:16 by: Ake54924

Bizarre how out of all the girls with sexy design from cybersleuth, the only character who got an actual porn series was one step away from being a faceless npc...

Posted on 28 January 2021, 13:35 by: suratkabar

Kunaboto tiddies always on point 😩👉👌💦

Posted on 28 January 2021, 14:12 by: imthedouchebag

incel for not wanting to get involved? was that even on the original work?

Posted on 28 January 2021, 14:31 by: Fringgs

Funny how in doujins the ugly always get the girl.. But IRL....yeah you know.. =x

Posted on 28 January 2021, 14:33 by: CatsAttackAgain

imthedouchebag
It's a translator thing. Artist posts his own translations after the pics on Twitter
https://twitter.com/d3yk7gh4df/status/1354361045045792768/photo/1

Posted on 28 January 2021, 15:21 by: Mainsaro

Please translate the Disgaea one

Posted on 28 January 2021, 18:12 by: Zemyih

Can we get a non-ass translation? Why do actual incels always gotta project?

Posted on 28 January 2021, 19:46 by: popioo1234

how is this ntr? she willingly accepted his confession.

Posted on 28 January 2021, 19:55 by: greengrasstree

It's netorare because you're supposed to feel like the MC (dude with the crush) lost the girl. He's an incel because he missed his chance to fuck and is clearly depressed about it. And let's face it, if you regularly look at netorare comics with ugly bastards, then you're probably an incel too lol

Posted on 28 January 2021, 20:05 by: metalsensei

@greengrasstree
But incels are misogynists and hate women.

Posted on 28 January 2021, 20:40 by: defski

The incel line within the brackets was completely made up, there's no such line in the original raw.
Dunno why you felt the need to insert an unnecessary line.
https://e-hentai.org/g/1835411/df858dcb2e/

Posted on 28 January 2021, 20:54 by: greengrasstree

The MC is even laughing at the thought of her sulking when she finds out the ugly bastard is posting vids of them fucking. He lost the girl and now wants to see her upset over being tricked by the ugly trash, even though he isn't expecting them to break up; he's become a bitter incel. And even if you're not one yourself, this porn is made for incels.

I'm just trying to pretend the ugly bastard is someone else, because LAWD SWEET MERCY Makiko is too fine. And yeah, I made a few embellishments with the translation, but only the "Continue at your own risk" and "Don't be an incel" parts were made up. Everything else is more or less spot on with Kunaboto's own translation.

Posted on 28 January 2021, 21:00 by: defski

^This is meant to be a translation, not a creative writing project. Please leave out any additional comments in the future, we read translations because we want to understand and enjoy the author's literature, not yours or anyone elses. At most, extra dialogue should only there to help dialogue flow better.

Posted on 28 January 2021, 21:07 by: greengrasstree

Bruh, it was only two lines that I made up. Or are y'all just mad that I reminded y'all what y'all are at the end of the day. XD

Posted on 28 January 2021, 21:22 by: knightoforder

Perhaps it is you who was reminded of something with this doujin that felt the need to add your silly statements in it, no?

Posted on 28 January 2021, 21:28 by: greengrasstree

I just wanted to give y'all some confidence lol

Posted on 28 January 2021, 22:42 by: fudragon146

@greengrasetree OMG shut up already all of your dumb statements are completely unnecessary and not everyone who reads and enjoys NTR doesn’t insert themselves as the mc I for one like to insert myself as the one stealing the girl not the other way around plus I love the corruption for the female character

Posted on 28 January 2021, 22:49 by: greengrasstree

Incel confirmed.

Posted on 28 January 2021, 23:42 by: Tnginamoka69420

Damn... 6.2 mb per page??? Thats High quality stash right there but I hope that whopping quality is the same as the english translated Tomoe gozen doujin which is sadly just 2.12 mb and I aint satisfied :( .

Posted on 29 January 2021, 02:40 by: greengrasstree

Alright, I took out the lines I added. Now take down the rewrite tag.

Y'all gonna keep downvoting me? Lol

Last edited on 29 January 2021, 07:15.

Posted on 29 January 2021, 08:54 by: XisaleX

I am in full support of this translation. NTR fans don't deserve to exist.

Posted on 29 January 2021, 08:58 by: rwpikul

@Fringgs:

There's a good reason for the 'ugly guy in porn' thing. In fact there are two of them.

In live action porn, the male lead generally needs to be able to get it up on command, on camera, keep it up and orgasm on cue. This means that the available talent pool is very limited and porn studios take what they can get. (This also creates an expectation that bleeds over into drawn/rendered porn.)

Having a unattractive male lead also fits with an intended male audience. It makes a fantasy of inserting yourself into the lead role much easier because, after all, if _this_ guy could score with her you should be able to get her, her sister and her best friend all at once, right?

Posted on 29 January 2021, 09:54 by: Zeikfried

@rwpikul

I hope that the next generation of Penuma will kill this trend. When anyone can have a 12 inch cock- hell even a 16+ inch cock, then it'll go back to the day when you have to be good looking, well-toned, and skilled.

Posted on 29 January 2021, 09:58 by: reignengine

This guy isn't ugly, he's a monster race from a game. No one's gonna look at him and say I'll fuck you, more like he'll be shit and tagged and be made the missing link.

Bu goddamn the art is just amazing. 👌

Posted on 29 January 2021, 11:47 by: BillNine10

LOL, I love NTR. But man, too short.

Although technically, this ain't NTR since she never gave any hints of ever giving a fuck about the narrator guy. Unless there's something in the source material, of which I know nothing about.

Posted on 29 January 2021, 11:51 by: Soldier A

>the only porn of Girl Cop Masaru is being fucked by a fat ugly guy

Why are we still here? Just to suffer?

Posted on 29 January 2021, 15:04 by: greengrasstree

So y'all gonna take down the rewrite tag? I took out the lines I made up so it's a more faithful translation.

And it's still NTR as we're supposed to feel sympathy for the main character.

Posted on 29 January 2021, 19:47 by: Algorm

What's all the fuss about the translation? Is pretty good so where is the problem. Some incels got butthurt or what

Posted on 29 January 2021, 19:55 by: pork:zero

@CatsAttackAgain If this is the artist's translation, it shouldn't be tagged "translated".

No clue if this is just a rewrite of what the artist gives, though.

Posted on 29 January 2021, 20:41 by: greengrasstree

It's basically the same as the author's translation, especially now that I took out the lines I made up. Some wording is different, but that's only so it flows better in English.

Now take down that "rewrite" tag.

Posted on 29 January 2021, 20:47 by: lastperv

please tag this as rewrite

Posted on 29 January 2021, 20:57 by: greengrasstree

So now y'all are going to purposefully keep that tag just to troll me. Should have never bothered fixing it, but of course there's no pleasing incels who get off to ugly bastards.

Posted on 30 January 2021, 00:44 by: KaInEvIL

I'd like some face sitting police abuse from that one. It's a massive tease though cause it doesn't have the Huge Belly ending.

Posted on 30 January 2021, 09:20 by: PaizuriFanatic

And once again the people who are here for the paizuri tag get shafted...water is wet

Posted on 30 January 2021, 17:22 by: Zemyih

Stop projecting, Algorm. Same with you, Xisale. Though the """translator""" did say one thing correct: why would anyone insert as the guy who gets cucked?

Posted on 30 January 2021, 21:59 by: Overlol

Digimon Cyber Sluts deserved more hentai and fanarts in general.

Posted on 20 May 2021, 13:32 by: Ricchi

Would be cool if not for the fat pig
You all really have shit taste ngl

Posted on 18 September 2021, 03:26 by: jfragrettel

Excellent work, great translation

Thank you for sharing it with the community

Waiting for new translations about other works of this great artist who have not yet been translated, as well as other works of this genre

Posted on 21 October 2021, 05:51 by: greengrasstree

Autistic cucks love NTR.

Posted on 19 April 2022, 00:17 by: EM1K04

I self insert as the cuck and get rock hard

Posted on 18 November 2022, 04:19 by: greengrasstree

Well, the scrapped sketch seems to show her asking the cuck out, but he turns her down so she goes back to the ugly bastard. Guess that wasn't depressing enough of an ending for Kunaboto; for the cuck to get over the girl on his own.

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