Sorry about my garbage editing, I will endeavor to increase my editing skills in the future. At the very least I hope that you can enjoy my translation.

thanks for the effort, but i do wonder why it seems many new editors here don't seem to ever read any previously uploaded good ones before. or just comics in general.
why is it so difficult to use the proper center aligned text instead of using the mostly bad looking left aligned (or sometimes right aligned) text?
how come this very simple thing always got overlooked recently?

Base +17, JukanX +25, Lexar917 +7, Lao Shan Long +7, AdmiralCrunch -6, Zoinks +6

Common sense isn't as common as you think.

Base +9, AdmiralCrunch -6, Zoinks +6

Typesetting is genuinely difficult, especially when you don't have any good tools. That aside, if you wanna clean this up in the future I'd recommend:
- Using a single font through-out. WildWords is a manga-appropriate font that is accepted by the vast majority of people, and it's free!
- Make sure to center all text both horizontally and vertically.
- Since the source are crisp digital images, you should save your edits as .png files. This both takes up less space and makes the result look better! Since this comic is grayscale (no color) you can even save it as grayscale!
- When you have to break up words make sure to avoid things like "yours elf" (pg. 5), instead use "your- self".
- I understand you used the first untranslated page as a cover, since you didn't want your comment page to be the first page, but you could have instead put that page last and used the first translated page as a cover.

Overall for an early effort this is a great job!

Base +10, kserox +27, funk_u_up +13, Dinosars +7, AdmiralCrunch +6, ShrikeRisen +6

I have left the scanlation world behind 8 years ago but it gives me joy whenever I see people giving newbies advice on what to do. Makes good mind refresher for me as well if I ever need to make a quick edit. Unfortunately a lot of newcomers seem to take criticism and advice rather badly.

Base +23, Dinosars +7, AdmiralCrunch +6, djgee2f +7

The plot has a lot of ZIG ZAG

Base +5, Dinosars +7, Beane +7

the plot kinda looks like reincarnated into otome game as antagonist follower character but somehow attract the attention of the original protagonist of the game.

i do hope we get to see if the author decided to explore/expand the storyline of this concept of one shot.

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