https://planz34.newgrounds.com/

Why is this rated so low?

Base +5

@Jio66623 This initial upload only has three pages, one of which is the cover. I'm sure the rating will change as more people see view this comic and updates are made to include the newer pages.

So far, the art is is pretty good in utilizing the TD style and the initial action is pretty hot, especially with the added neon dyes for the characters. There's no dialogue but the expressions make the difference and there have been comics/manga/doujinshi that employed the no speech bubble style very well. I'd say this has a promising start.

Base +22, fatjoe400 +6, gravalpea +8

Will there be more of this comic do you think? This artist is definitely at their best when emulating other styles.

Base +4

I really hope this becomes a series as this is awesome with the other girls showing up. I mean, I know its a commission but hot dayum this is really good.

Base +6