Some typos/ grammar / spelling Page 2: - "she happened to catch Kousuke's eye and falls into his clutches"; Either "she happens... and falls..." or "she happened... and fell..." - "still growing and is alomst"; "...and is almost" Page 11: "I'd pay they're minds a visit; "I'd pay their minds a visit" page 23 "your breasts is bigger"; "your breasts are bigger"
If you enjoyed the creator’s work, please go and support them for even more content in the future! I really enjoyed the possession work shown in this doujin. There are a lot of aspects from the possession genre that are done well. From dual possession to mind wielding. Cosplaying fanservice and exciting lesbian scenes. This is a high-quality comic. The fact that Hyoui Lover created an English translated version shows that they are putting great effort into their work. Duokuma has done a great job with the art style as well to bring this story to life.
Yeah, I might be a shill writing this, but I really loved this work enough to write this out. If you have the means to support their work, please do so. This is high-quality stuff that I’m very happy to support myself!
Oh! I loved reading this review of the doujin that maybe you might find some fun in reading as well. I was reading the google translated version since I can’t read Japanese, but the overall review was still understandable when translated. It’s good for research and development stuff. :) https://ch.dlsite.com/matome/105088