Most of these are impossible to read and compressed as fuck. The captioner needs to learn to make text bigger and more readable, and to save as something that doesn't compress like .png Other than that of the ones I can actually read these are pretty rough, but there's potential.
I wish I could agree with BlackAndWhiteKat that these show potential, but I really don't think they do. At best this is just using people's art without permission (I assume because who in their right mind would agree to this) and slapping on VERY poorly written "stories". The only potential to analyze here is the writing, and it's at a level that a grade school student could easily surpass. This is clearly a person that the education system has failed miserably, if they're even out of school that is. The only other thing to analyze is the formatting (the way the text is added) and it's also terribly done, half of these are basically illegible. The best way to improve this would be to improve the grammar, writing, writing style, and remove the stolen art entirely- in other words everything. There's really no redeeming quality other than the small amount of creativity put into the stories, but even then it's heavily leaning on the art to do so. Having a story be inspired by a picture you saw is a neat idea, but when it's all you do and you do it terribly, maybe it's time to stop. At the very least to stop sharing them, if you really enjoy basically defacing art, then do it for yourself and keep it to yourself.
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