^ yeah I can see that. I wanted it to be primarily about Kawakami and how the girls were basically Kamoshida's slaves, fitting with the whole king dynamic. It might have served the comic better if they had a more active role in Kawakami's scenes but I decided to have it just be one and one with some passive onlookers. If I ever decide to make a sequel on this I'll defintely make them have a more active role. Thanks for the constructive criticism, it's actually given me a few ideas.
If anyone liked this you can follow me on twitter where I have some more 3D stuff https://twitter.com/Nilbog3D/status/1362500155711324166?s=20 I'm very much an amateur and I'm not 100% confident in my abilities but I hope to improve over time and learn some new techniques to make my work better.
I liked it for what it was. I liked the little dialogue boxes and actual characters portraits. If you do plan on doing another, it'd be great to see you include the other women more. I'd like to see you make a story of Kamoshida stealing more women. Good work.