Translated and cleaned by me.

Original gallery:https://e-hentai.org/g/1849169/4b33efb85b/

the artwork in this one is excellent, full color, and also very good vantage points and a lot of action on every page. Thanks so much for sharing this!

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Woah that was extremely fast!

thank you so much to the translator for working on this!

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"Something like this hearing me strange"

Another machine translation?

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my meme go "this translation is fast as fuck boi"
my dick go "orc and goblin gangbang theme is good for my dick"
my mind go "is she really wearing mage-oriented equipment and go full melee mode ALONE in a dungeon filled with goblin and orc ?"

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Ahh damn, I was having trouble with that line. At that point she's losing focus and isn't talking in kanji anymore which makes it harder for me to understand, especially when she speaks in Kansai dialect and I have no experience with this. Apparently they negate with -へん and therefore the preceding kana would become 聞いて listening(ongoing). I'll update the gallery in a minute.

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Yeah, something like this hearing me strange is definitely a bit of a poor line. The new line is much better. Might be helpful to get someone to proofread the scripts at the end, the other lines were, well, more or less alright and made technical sense but they definitely caught me off guard as a native english speaker.

The typesetting can definitely be tightened up a bit, my only criticism since I'm not great at editing like folks like Ancient-Alien and co, is that typically most people don't write in the bubbles top down, even if it's like that in Japanese or it doesn't fit in the bubble. It's a pain in the ass to redraw, but it's more readable left to right than top down. Also, a few lines weren't centered or went straight off in certain bubbles.

There are folks who are always willing to help people with typesetting, I don't want to speak for them but I can find out if they have time to give you advice. I know people like ZedsShadow gives great advice to people, Ancient-Alien, and quite a number of other folks. Just a little bit of polishing up and this whole thing would look super nice!

Hope that came off constructive - it wasn't meant to be in a rude way whatsoever. I absolutely love Tsuina and their hardcore dedication to Tomoko, so it brightened my day to see a new gallery uploaded. Thanks for the work you put in on it OP! Keep it up, keep improving! The best way to learn is to just keep doing it!

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Yeah, in a couple of cases I went with what the interface was saying instead of what it would be localized as to make it so there wasn't a conflict. Should have checked my typesetting, that's fair. To be honest I wasn't planning on translating or releasing a translation last night but the spirit caught me :P

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Here are a few advices to polish your typesetting:

1. You need some comic fonts for the dialog. Anime Ace (not the easiest to work with), Komika, Wurper Comics, Wurmics Bravo are free fontd you can download from sites like dafont.com. You can also browse through the free section of blambot.com and see if you like some fonts there.

2. You also need better fonts for moans. Yikes, SF Grunge Sans can be useful here. You can look in the handwritten section of dafont.com and see of you find some you like. And as a more specific advice, for gallery page 24 (0023.jp) I would have used AshcanBB from Blambot.

3. Avoid vertikal text as much as possible. Too much of it makes the text just harder to read.

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I know i saw that outfit reference somewhere, please help me find the source

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1. I really have grown to dislike the "standard translated doujin" font, but I'll look into these.

2. Yeah, I had to modify a bunch of the sound effects because when I read them they sounded like laughing to me.

3. Yeah, I think in two cases I'm going to have to stick to vertical, the SMOOOOCH and the 24(23.jpg) No, but I can clean up the rest of em.

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At least it didn't rain.

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Redid all of the text boxes with new fonts, cleaned up some of the language, added more SFX translations, and cleaned up the text bubbles a bit more.

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If I was playing this game, I'd be using Paralysis, even Mild Paralysis lasts apparently enough time for some Goblins and orcs to impregnate a girl, imagine how OP these things would be.

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Everybody knows the Japanese game devs get hard for status effects.

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nice cover sideboob

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Masterpiece!!

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Kinda wandering if there's gonna be a Lv. 2!

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I thought I had a version without this white censorship but I think it was just a tin memory

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