I didn't realize last gallery, but dang this is your groups first translation? Taking on a pretty good task. My JP is elementary grade level so I can't speak to that but everything looked pretty good. For your first release this is loads better than most folks stuff. Good job!
The second chapter didn't disappoint. Really cute, cutely awkward at some points. I love the girl and the relationship here. It's progressing at a nice rate, and I love the fact this isn't a cliched "D-doh I raped you because you were too sexy, forgive me- Oh, we're in a relationship now? Tight" trope you see in a lot of other stuff. Their reactions feel pretty spot on for what you could (possibly) expect out of people in this actual situation. Enjoying the hell out of this series, looking forward to Ch. 3! Thanks guys!