This work isn't mine, I only traduce him Here is a link for the original work and to visit the autor:https://www.pixiv.net/en/artworks/75074664

I'm assuming "traduce" means "translate for"? No offense, but your traduction needs work.

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If you're going to translate like this, don't even bother.

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traduce
verb
speak badly of or tell lies about (someone) so as to damage their reputation.

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Before translating from one language to another, please make sure you understand both languages first.

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Bare minimum put "English" in quotation marks.

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Who is Kirigiri Herbal Boda Enoshima? How did Enoshima stick her cock in another girl's pussy? She doesn't have a cock.
Also, I don't know why Enoshima was rejuvenated by Kirigiri's cheerful support. Why would Kirigiri support Enoshima?
Also, "lujury" (with an L), "eveything", and "Nagdick" aren't words, and I don't see a character named "Nagdick".

I haven't taken a Spanish class since 8th grade, but I definitely would've understood it better if you translated into that. I understand this as well as the original Korean version - not at all.

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It genuinely feels like even Google Translate would do a better job at this.

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Rough grammar
p1: are say here and there -> are said here and there
p1: to do with you -> to do it with you
p1: lujury sex -> luxury sex (?)
p2: I put my cock -> You put your cock
p2: you're forced -> you forced him
p3: not a bully but a rape -> not bullying, but rape
p3: when she see me here -> while she's watching
p4: isn't it a long-awaited -> isn't it long awaited
p5: why this is feeling -> why does this feel
p7: the hurt -> to hurt
p8: my will and my will -> one is redundant
p10: lujury sex -> luxury sex (?)

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