[Shoot The Moon (Fuetakishi)] Touchuukasou 8 ~Shinyuu no Shimai o Musaboru Natsu~ Saishuushou [English] {Doujins.com} [Digital]

Posted on 25 February 2021, 22:43 by: Viktor0nk

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Posted on 22 February 2021, 23:24 by: Letmeinjoe09

Somehow dumber than I expected but his art is funny so I give it a 3.5

Posted on 23 February 2021, 00:04 by: AntiShisno

Now that this series is complete hopefully we get more of the Batsu Game series.

Or, All-Father willing, a continuation of the High Elf x High School series.

Posted on 23 February 2021, 00:04 by: RaizelX

So he goes to live with an uncle family who watches the sisters stream porn

Also I’ll never understand the people who complain, you are literally like someone complaining about the guy not taking in the groceries in those incest pornos or complaining that the person shouldn’t really be stuck in the sink/dryer etc. etc

It’s porn we’re here to fap the story is just an engine

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Posted on 23 February 2021, 00:11 by: imthedouchebag

The guy talks way too much.

Posted on 23 February 2021, 00:22 by: DinoCock

Did any one else feel like this was...padded out?

Posted on 23 February 2021, 00:44 by: sshions

Still don't really get at all why any of this means saying goodbye to their brother. they ain't married/ moving town /dropping school. What's the logic?

Posted on 23 February 2021, 00:53 by: SyriasX

@ DinoCock

dude this kinda story will always be "padded out" both the girls were show to be retarded enough that they'd sleep with the guy and due to NTR/general porn logic there is no way anyone would really interfere. even an ending were they guy (and possibly the girls) get their shit wrecked would feel drawn out. its all about the cuck and honestly i'll always find it hilariously dumb when all it takes to uproot 90% of these NTR stories is talking to people.

still wish it was more common for the epelouge to be cuck years later NOT a pron addict and the bitches try clawing their way back into his life cus mister bull went on to greener pastures

Posted on 23 February 2021, 00:56 by: shakuganaexa

When will we get a sequel series? This has a lot of potential. Maybe we could get a series told from Mitsuru's perspective with the story being told from his point of view. Maybe we could have Mitsuru eventually return and when he does he discovers his sisters having pregnant bellies then they invite him to be the one to shoot the pregnant sex AV.

Posted on 23 February 2021, 00:57 by: fudragon146

This is finally over

I fell out with this series since chapter 4

Posted on 23 February 2021, 01:19 by: moximoore

Hmm.. I know this is asking a bit much... But, Time Skip? ;D

Posted on 23 February 2021, 01:41 by: Orengestar

if only the sluts and the bastard got killed. better ending than the shit we got here.

Posted on 23 February 2021, 01:44 by: Yukipo~

Fucking glad it's over of course it had a horrible ending but at this point I don't anyone cared anymore, we all just wanted him to be done with this and move so maybe now he can start drawing for real because the worst thing that came out of this trash wasn't the shit story but watching his art deteriorate through time and I can only blame this piece of trash for that!

Fucking glad it's over of course it had a horrible ending but at this point I don't anyone cared anymore, we all just wanted him to be done with this and move so maybe now he can start drawing for real because the worst thing that came out of this trash wasn't the shit story but watching his art deteriorate through time and I can only blame this piece of trash for that!

Posted on 23 February 2021, 01:59 by: greengrasstree

Didn't we all think the glasses dude at the end was an older Mitsuru? Also, Mitsuru went to university after this? I thought he was only in middle school.

Posted on 23 February 2021, 02:04 by: tearsax

Mmm, i only read the first 2 chapters and just skimmed over the other chapters, still i got pretty much what was going on. Even so, i dont really get how from the previous chapter to this one the sisters lost the little braincells they had left and agreed to participate in a threesome that was gonna be streamed to their little brother.
I know this has been a no-brain story from the very beginning, but it sure escalated quickly from chapter 7 LOL

Personally, if i was the MC i would have used the video to bargain with the dudes bullying me. Its a hentain universe, so trash like them most likely are also into blackmail and rape, i would show them a sample of the video with the faces of the girls censored and tell them that once they have beat the living crap out of that shaved dude i would give them the full video so they can use it as blackmail material or whatever rapey dudes like them do.
And once my sisters graduated (or dropped) from school, i would upload the video to some porn site and share the URL with literally everyone who might know them, to be sure their lives are ruined for good even after their school life is over.

Not like any author out there is gonna turn a netorare story into a decent revenge one (once i found an author who wanted to do it, but got cold feet and dropped the idea together with the series xD) but i would really appreciate it if from time to time we got something new instead of your usual MC that faps to his "best friend" taking his sisters anal virginity while they scream that his dick is more important than their brother...

@greengrasstree
Its clearly stated that its his uncle tho.

@Yukipo~
So i wasnt the only who thought that about the art? I've been reading Fuetakishi's works since forevere and i really love his art style, but since he stopped doing comercial hentai to focus on his circle, his art style has been evolving in a way i quite dont like. I mean, i like thick girls, but lately (especially in his NTR series) the author has dropped any detail into body proportions to just focus on "the bigger, the better". Especially in this series with each passing chapter the girls kept "growing" and at some point they just look... weird.

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Posted on 23 February 2021, 03:25 by: roxas31

Only positive i got from this was mitsuru got so devastated/ maybe enlightened that he skipped high school entirely and went straight to uni while his sisters stayed in high school. I'd say that was a good thing for him.

Posted on 23 February 2021, 03:31 by: Fringgs

oh dang i thought that was an older version of him lol,
good thing this shit is over, this story went cringe to shit so fast, even the ending is uhh... well at least the MC went somewhere far away, But whatever happened to the sisters saying "We will protect you bro" nope... the dick is so OP they've become sluts and probably will have a shitty life from now..

Hope Author doesn't go back to this, and move on to another project!

Posted on 23 February 2021, 03:40 by: greengrasstree

@tearsax: The sample gallery made it seem like he was an older Mitsuru. And I don't think most of us understand Japanese, so when we saw the raw, we thought he was an older Mitsuru.

Posted on 23 February 2021, 04:18 by: l337t3r

Mitsuru have so little presence throughout the story this feel less like an NTR, and just another corruption story with takashi as the protagonist who just happened to be NTRing his 'buddy'

Posted on 23 February 2021, 04:45 by: gradius

Great, is over.

Posted on 23 February 2021, 04:48 by: CDub7888

Once again, the lack of anything to be invested in shows why hack writing and NTR winds up creating an ultimately shitty product. The fuckhole girls are borderline mentally disabled, the asshole NTR guy is standard invincible asshole NTR guy, and the NTR victim who actually has the most detail compared to everybody else is irrelevant for about half of the series he's supposed to be relevant in.

The motivations are weak, the characters are boring, and dear god, it's been a while since I've been able to use the phrase "dumb hentai girls are dumb". This could've been interesting if it had just a little bit of effort put into it outside of the artwork (and even then, that's only for how the girls are drawn). But cashgrab NTR will always be cashgrab.

Posted on 23 February 2021, 05:03 by: Dr H. Fapalot

I love how the netorare'd guy's first thoughts include "Their nipples are pink". It's like this was really important to him somehow lol.

Posted on 23 February 2021, 05:47 by: NeverLucky27

Why is there 8 chapters of this shit, you could literally reduce this entire thing into half of that. This is literally any generic ntr story with the same stupid plot except you stretch it and instead of cucking 1 girl, you cuck both of them.

Posted on 23 February 2021, 05:48 by: MacacoLendario

The least the author should have done was to show the sisters in the future
I should have shown him leaving the house and the sisters too

This is the problem with hentais (8 caps to make a common garbage end like almost all in the end)

Posted on 23 February 2021, 06:31 by: Nyarlathotep_1

ANother most generic NTR... Don't get me wrong, I like NTR (or, at least some work with it) and Fuetakishi style... but:
1) his style, after changing to NTR became "the bigger, the better". No proportion at all.
2) most generic plot, even for NTR. Sisters are just sluts who love sex and don't care about anything else.
3) Completely stupid NTR. Without it could be good wotk with humor, few dialogs and etc... With it, it feels like he just forcibly injected NTR here and didn't care how to put it

Hope now he returns to a continuation of the High Elf x High School series. Many still want it.

Posted on 23 February 2021, 12:22 by: Gratigon

The whole thing took way too long and ultimately, shit was repetitive.

Posted on 23 February 2021, 12:32 by: dgjdgjdgj

No matter how dumb it is i still get off by the art alone. Oh and mitsuru getting devastated was satisfying too.

Posted on 23 February 2021, 13:11 by: randomuserv

My problem with this is that after 8 fcking chapters the girls are the same, there is no mind break.

I read some NTR, because of the art and the mind break they gave, this one felt like nothing, even his vanilla work with the elf has more of this tag than this series.

Really boring, also I can understand that you want to bang the 2 hot sister of your friend, but it's really necessary to stream it? Haha

Posted on 23 February 2021, 15:55 by: vjbeal96

Ya know what pissed me off about this? It wasn't the fact they jumped through 8 hoops of bs to get to this conclusion. It isn't the fact that they forgot the brother existed. It's on pg 44 where the kid says "my parents are shit and, im gonna take your sister cause, i deserve it". The fuck? Maybe if they spent the whole 8 chapters showing the boys lonely sad life and some hidden character that makes the sisters lean more towards him then ya know "if you want me to be your brothers friend you gotta have sex with me." maybe it would be ten times better. What a waste of time and ink.

Posted on 23 February 2021, 16:03 by: RaizelX

Im also disappointed that this is anal only

Posted on 23 February 2021, 18:21 by: MacacoLendario

The least the author should have done was to show the sisters in the future
I should have shown him leaving the house and the sisters too

This is the problem with hentais (8 caps to make a common garbage end like almost all in the end)

Posted on 24 February 2021, 00:04 by: greengrasstree

So, Mitsuru was in middle school, right? He seriously went to university right after all this? Damn son, he got the best ending. Turned his loss into success by becoming a child genius.

Posted on 24 February 2021, 00:21 by: Forgunia

This series became dumber with each sequel.

Posted on 24 February 2021, 02:26 by: Harkinian

Fucking lost it at the uncle at the end failing to recognize the girls: "Gee willikers, these girls who have the same body types as my nieces, the same hairstyles as my nieces and who are sisters just like my nieces sure look similar to my nieces! What a funny coincidence!"

Posted on 25 February 2021, 03:59 by: datri_22

Es el final P=?

Posted on 26 February 2021, 02:01 by: robus77

Regardless of the number of chapters and the plot, did anyone else notice that half of this chapter was copied and pasted from the other half. It's literally the same anal scene, just with the other sister. It's about 15 pages of the same thing. IMO that's what was the worst part about this, there was no variety in this entire series. It's boring as hell, just repeating itself over and over and over again

Posted on 26 February 2021, 03:34 by: Loki The Flameshield

Y'know...this may actually be for the best for Mitusuru in the long run. Also, am I the only one who feels that this series was redundant?

Posted on 26 February 2021, 04:46 by: linkCS

tbh that was an extremely long build up for a very generic NTR ending lol.

Posted on 26 February 2021, 10:50 by: SyriasX

I like how my original comment basically said what a lot of people here said but some people remembered me from earlier comments on this story (or just dont like me for some reason) and power downvoted me to oblivion... not great.

that aside, yeah, this story had no reason to extend as long as it did and it was a waste of time to even entertain the thought of saying anything about the stories bull. nobody has any substance to their character and that's how most NTR keeps cus even the girl that wanted to save the day only had a solution of "get fucked... until he stops?". even the brother getting cucked didnt do anything with the advantageous position he had. the extension of the series was just for there to be more of it and the only reason i (personally) care to talk about it is because its NTR and i dont find much joy beyond just trying to enjoy the story... which isnt great seeing as most NTR is contrived (more so than normal hentai)

Posted on 26 February 2021, 18:27 by: tearsax

It began as shit. It ended as shit.

Posted on 27 February 2021, 07:36 by: Ravna3

So his life was "hard" because his parent didn't care about him, but he found somebody that he could call "best friend" and then he decided to fuck his only friend because of what reason? why would you hurt your only friend and take away both of his sisters? the story doesn't make any goddam sense and the thing is who cares about the story? yet we have 8 chapters...

Posted on 27 February 2021, 09:23 by: dap00

At this point I feel like the act was the girls pretending to care about the brother still, they've been confessing their love for dick for about five books straight each, at least.

Posted on 27 February 2021, 11:14 by: IC DeaDPiPoL

good start but the last 2 chapter lacks impact and substance

Posted on 27 February 2021, 12:06 by: cursedinfernus

Definitely a memorable series. However the end should have been more detailed, talking about rushed

Posted on 27 February 2021, 13:23 by: Hamarchy

I love how everyone has the same feeling about the plot of this one.
I'm not disparaging the writers or artists but....boy this one was fuckin bad.
Please....PLEASE....move forward from this and never look back

Posted on 27 February 2021, 23:36 by: Gilgamesch

NTR is faggots

Posted on 28 February 2021, 11:11 by: possum1

everyone talking about the plot. and here i am, wondering what did he do to get so many camera angles in 1 video.

Posted on 12 March 2021, 08:16 by: SyriasX

@ possum1

to be fair they're equally convoluted

Posted on 30 April 2021, 16:26 by: RaizelX

So I came back to this after a while and what really gets me is that the sisters apparently kept fucking the friend either for the rest of summer or for at least another year seeing as the Mc went to university. Fuetakishi could have milked or at least fleshed the story out in that area more but it looks like he just gave up in the end. Like the sisters essentially said fuck their promise to raise mitsuru in place of their dead parents for dick

Posted on 20 May 2021, 05:15 by: Big_Cookie

My major comment on the other thread's page got deleted so I will try to sum up and add some stuff.

1. Not enough raunchy / varied scenes. While adding ahegao and mind break could make this much more enjoyable, simply doing this could make it better. Such as... making the girls fuck randoms, or fucking the girls in front of Mitsuru( IRL).

2. Not enough ahegao / mind break. Ya know, the main enjoyable part of NTR...at least for me is the gradual corruption/mind break. Hell, take away the mind break and only including the ahegao would make the series a solid 8, cause right now it's a 6 or a 7. Not having either just makes the sex scenes seem like "dark vanilla", especially because Mitsuru has less screen time than fucking Matt from Death Note. So Fuetakishi really needs to work on his ahegao faces, because it really doesn't take a genius to put in some dialogue for the mind break..

Full blown ahegao should've been added for Mari in part 3 the latest, mind break in part 4 for her the latest(and yes I do realize we got like maybe 3 bubbles of mind break from her but then she disappeared for the rest of the chapter, conveniently..) . Full blown ahegao for Oomiya at chapter 5 and mind break for her at chapter 6 the latest.

3. Oomiya(the little sister's) "Tsundere" ( I don't like Takeshi ) attitude got super fucking annoying ever since part 6 where she played dog for Takeshi.

After looking at the sketches for his new work, I can say that while there's no evidence of better ahegao, the girls are doing more slutty shit like v signs and he's using 'used condoms' now, cause ya know, it's a trend

:)

Posted on 27 September 2021, 15:37 by: bananahabroh

fuetakishi is just retarded at making storylines

Posted on 12 December 2021, 23:27 by: SanyaBane

Fuetakashi girls drawing are one if the best I've seen, but this plot...

Posted on 02 March 2022, 12:10 by: pusangcat

Now I can Laugh hard that the seiries Over!! BWahahh what a dumb series, funny.

Posted on 18 August 2022, 21:39 by: Agent Bun

– Chapter 1
– Chapter 2
– Chapter 3
– Chapter 4
– Chapter 5
– Chapter 6
– Chapter 7
– Chapter 8 (You are here)

Posted on 11 September 2022, 18:38 by: RaizelX

He’s making a new one for these girls apparently, but it looks like they might be whoring themselves out now not sure either way it still feels kind of empty with an ending like this seeing as we never saw the fall out between them after matsuri watched the video. Then again the oldest sister said they were willing to abandon him so I guess that’s it.

Posted on 12 June 2025, 23:13 by: Deus Xongwei

The sisters pretty much forgot about Mitsuru immediately after fucking Takashi anyway. Mitsuru was just a shallow attachment to them to spice up their (and NTRash fans) guilty sex kink with a total asshole. One thing that gets on my nerves in this NTR meta of what dominates modern hentai is how the issues some of us points out about the story gets "confirmation" via lazy character dialogue in the story. It always seems like the author is lazily addressing some criticisms or insecurities within the work when they do that. Fuetakishi thinks because he makes a character say what we're all thinking about Mitsuru being dense, failing to make any moves, and being weak, magically it fixes how dumb their story is. It just reinforces are artifically lengthen this story has been. If you want to lengthe a story, do character development. Make a relationship seem believable first if you're gonna ruin it with this shitty plot.

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