Felt like translating some of dining's work.
Original work :

Commission request can be forwarded to shtranslate69@gmail.com

original work : https://e-hentai.org/g/1057840/13953e7883/ & https://e-hentai.org/g/1056442/8f01d993d7/

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Thanks, this gallery will be useful as an example for aspiring typesetters on why you should leave some space in the text bubbles.
Not knocking you, back in my day I used to do so too, though not to this extent. Admittedly with those x1200 raws I had to work with you couldn't easily decrease font size too much without impacting legibility...

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You know apostrophe is a thing right? Like, that small ' stuff you use in contractions.

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@AssSpanker @JukanX Noted, thak you for the helpful feedback. Will do more to improve any and all future work from myself.

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@ashelol42 can u link me sauce of pg31

nvm i found it https://e-hentai.org/g/1850401/653fc67e6e/

Last edited on 04 March 2021, 18:10.

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While I generally don't complain about most translation works, but uh.. if text is randomly cutting mid word shrink the font, its making it a bit hard to read.

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Compared to other dining's works this is vanilla.

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Anyone know if more is in the works? really like the mental conditioning theme

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@ashelol42 is there a part 3 to this....

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eh, went through original with my garbage level Japanese. And ooof this translation takes some liberties. kinda changes a feel. I am not sure why it had to be changed in some places even. like most innocent thing where Yuzuki asks where Kasumi got her uniform. in raws it's auction (オークション). in this translation it's "Friend" for some reason. and there many of those mistranslations that change the feel of the story. not that i should be talking much - considering that i am just complaining without doing any translations myself - but i still find it weird.

Last edited on 11 October 2024, 07:57.

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