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I can't tell if the English is bad or if the writing is just insane

Base +6, ZimZamster +6

Wow. I never thought someone would actually translate this. I was really happy just to see it uploaded.
Much obliged.

Base +6

@catpetter69 nah, the English is bad. To say nothing of translation accuracy, there's more than a handful of erroneous words added to sentences.

I always love a good futa doujin and this was at least readable but this desperately needs an editor/ proofreader. And to at least give them the benefit of the doubt, if the Japanese is also this messy and breaks grammatical structure, please be more liberal with the translation to convey the same messy speech without just extra words that shouldn't be there.

Base +7, Gabs999 +6, 151132 +8