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Peach seems to be acting rather cruel on page 4. Even regarding the time peach was possessed by the Shadow Queen, that's a bit much for her.

I know that she turns down both Mario and Bowsers proposals in the actual game, but it seems the artist thought of turning her personality a little sour for this comic...

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...proceed.

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How am I supposed to read these panels? This seems highly unintuitive and arbitrary. Like, if you want me to read in a nonstandard order, help guide my eyes to do that!

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Sorry about the messed panels, guys. I'll work to make the next pages more intuitive .

I wrote Peach as a selfish bitch and Mario as a simp. Their personalities are totally different from any game and will emerge along the comic.

Thanks fot the feedback

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Well now I don't know how I feel about this.

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I'll definitely be following this. Loving how Peach has a bit of sass to her.

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Maybe have Peach have sex with Mario again in the end.

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There’s being sassy, then there’s being a total bitch. And this Peach certainly isn’t Option A. Seriously, lay back with the salt and be thankful if nothing else.

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It seemed like I was finally getting some Mario actually gets to fuck Peach, but then that lasted like 2 pages before Peach became a gigantic cunt.

God damn this just sucks

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I knew you knew I knew you knew I knew you knew I knew you knew all along.... all along......all along!

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So she's fine with a toad but not mario?

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So far I'm liking the premise; Peach using Mario to experiment on different creatures for sex.

I still think Mario's proportions is unsettling; the big head and small body reminds me of Jimmy Neutron...it's just weird for sex scenes, but eventually I've gotten use to it. Toadette is an odd case, but somehow appealing in it's own way. I like how it's implied she's a whore with those nipple piercings.

Kinda wished you drew Yoshi with a regular pink-red reptilian twin dicks.

Regardless I'm looking forward to what happens next.

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Wait mario is a simp? Wellll yeah your kinda right lol. Any chance of bowser getting some of peach?

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This is a great idea. Keep up the good work

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Thanks again for the feedback! I'm working to always improve the comic

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Can someone tell me what's up with peach suddenly having red eyes in pg 13? She looks kinda evil.

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It’d be cool to see Mario possess some girls too, never seen anyone have him possess toadette before~

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Loved seeing yoshi impregnate peach . I guess he didn't like being possessed

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Missed opportunity on page 51 for the line "That bitch" to read "That-a bitch"

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toadette with pierced nipples was 10/10 didn't see it coming will nut again

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Why Mario's head is huge in page 56?

Hoping for some fully naked Pauline.

Last edited on 19 December 2021, 17:14.

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Oh wow Mario in page 62 actually acting like a normal person.
Edit: Andd he's back to being a pussy.

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https://e-hentai.org/s/fd7271ba07/2087788-62

So its finally gonna happen? Mario becoming the anti-simp alpha male?

Also, I'm just now realizing after all this time Cappy just doesn't exist, despite Mario possessing anyone with his cap. Kinda makes sense or else Cappy would had talked some sense to Mario about how much of a bitching whore Pewch is and this comic would had ended sooner.

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1000% certain he’s about to use Cappy.

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Had peach been possessed by the shadow queen here it would make some sense, however she is just acting like a straight up bitch. Had it been me I would have dropped Peach like a bad habit and moved onto Pauline.

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Hope we get a Bleached version.

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Let's hope that they remember that Yoshi's the one who put a bun in her oven.

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Dont worry. The bun is cooking good

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Well, at least Mario's finally thinking, for once.

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I grantee you the moment she learns she has a bun in her oven she will drop the bitch attitude, and beg Mario to take her back. I doubt Mario will be based enough to tell her to kick rocks.

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Love the big panels with Peach during sex.
The whole cucking Mario then Mario uncucking himself is nice. I don't like cucking but this adds a little rape-iness to it. Never seen this before. I like it.

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I'd love to see her get fucked by a Blooper Squid underwater at some point

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I said it before and I will say it again. Peach in this one is acting like a total bitch thinking she can have Mario eyes only on her while she can screw every Yoshi, Blackman, and Servant she wants. It would truly serve her right if Mario not only left her for his true girlfriend (seeing as Peach and Mario in the canon never was made official where as when Mario had Pauline they were) but when she found out she is pregnant he tells her to kick rocks. We all know Yoshi is the father so if he did that and they did a test Mario wouldn't be on the hook for it.

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https://e-hentai.org/s/d26f885531/2182933-82
Damn, Pauline is an amazonian! It's been awhile since I played any Mario spin-offs, but is she really that tall? If so, credit to the artist for paying attention to the details.

I recalled Rosalina being somewhat taller than the princesses, so that would make two over 6ft tall human girls in Mario's world.

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Damn, I hate how Peach is an absolute douchebag in this story.

Can't Pauline just punch her in her face and tell her to fuck off?

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reply to SuperDef
All the characters that I represent in my comic are based on the game Super Mario Odyssey. Before I started drawing I did some research about the height of the characters (main, secondary and even creatures), but there is no official/canonical information. So I used screenshots of the game, the game itself (I have a copy) and youtube videos. The result of my research on heights was: Mario 105 cm (3 ft 5 in), Peach 134 cm (4 ft 5 in), Pauline 172 cm (5 ft 8 in) and so on.

Also, if you pay attention you will notice that the heads of all the main and secondary characters are disproportionate. Mario's head is almost the same size as the rest of his body, and even Pauline's head is much larger than that of an 'ordinary human'.

And between the princesses Peach and Daisy are almost the same height while Rosalina is a little bigger than them.

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And here I thought Mario was going to break away from princess Bitch and get with his original girlfriend Pauline only for him to turn out to still be on her leash. somewhat disappointing, but the rest wasn't in the least surprising.

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So, in the end Mario had Pauline, good.

More Pauline hentai is always great despite of how much I hate Peach being a possessive douchebag and Mario being a dumbass lackey.

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