I decensored it as practice. Criticism is welcomed.

Good story, good art and definitely good effort from you, Tasiam.

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nice work tasiam

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Thanks for your work man!

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Damn those nipples are a thing of beauty.

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How was this decensored compared to the 2013 upload? https://e-hentai.org/g/599021/87fcaa4a2b/ They look the same...?

**Edit** I was comparing page 25, which is identical (white decensor lines on both).
But looking closer, I CAN see the cleanup work on 18, 20, 23, 24, 27, 29, 31 decensoring all the small white lines.

Last edited on 18 March 2021, 22:35.

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censored
https://e-hentai.org/s/4de0bcdf84/1869427-25

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I think I got diabetes from reading this

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When I got to the second to last page I thought "I am not ready for this", glad it stayed sweet till the very end.

Now let's cheer as these two lovebirds elope to somewhere quiet and cozy. <3

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Bottom of page 32 is also still censored

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>The meteor rain over the Perseus constellation
...Better and less awkwardly known as the Perseid meteor shower.

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