Decided to try my hand at typesetting and redrawing. Machine Translation get's a bad wrap but to be honest DeepL did a great job of getting the general idea, and there wasn't any complex conversations in this doujin anyway. I purchased this one myself but if you enjoy it please buy it. https://www.dlsite.com/maniax/work/=/product_id/RJ320318.html

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will there be a sequel?

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This is adorable. I couldn't even fap I was giggling so much.

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Looking at the authors previous works, I'm surprised there's no scat in this one.

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He was lucky that she has such a mom :)

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Mom is a total sadist. Can we have a spin-off manga about her?

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Props for DeepL. Better than the people using bing or google translate or whatever others use for machine translations.

It's way better translations than most of the stuff on this site by fact that most "translations" simply don't translate many phrases and merely transcribe them into english. Or maybe a TL's note is placed when an equivalent phrase exists in english. Or just taking the phrasing literally and turning it into something that a native english speaker wouldn't say. Some translators seem to feel the need to add their own shit interpretations on the author's actual words as well, which really grinds my gears.

DeepL actually translates them, even if it isn't perfect. Much more natural than the partial transliterations, TL notes, weeb transcriptions, and other such mediocrity that too often passes for a translation on this site. For simple doujins like this, this is a absolutely adequate, and I'd argue superior, way of translating.

The only thing I'd change in the first few pages is pg 4 panel 1, "the noise of the shower" to "the shower's noise". Or more naturally but less literal to the japanese "noun の noun" phrasing, "this noisy shower". The former is more like romance language phrasing and needlessly wordy in english. DeepL translates like that because it's always right while the latter two phrasing are dependent on context. I'd keep that in mind if you plan to do further DeepL translations.

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"Oh wow, this is good. Little awkward in parts, like spreading the bunghole and all that, but it's not bad at all. Wonder what the artist's other works are like."

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Fucking scat

why is it always scat

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Mom in the Sequel: I've become a nudist also.

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